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You're Mine

August 6, 2009
By distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"


Verse 1:


When you’ve lost your way,
And you don’t know which path to take; Just reach for my hand, and I’ll show you the way
When the storm of life brings you farther than you want to go
Reach for my hand, and I’ll never let go.

Chorus:
When the rain falls,
when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Verse 2:

When trials seem to rip up your dreams,
Don’t give up, and don’t give in
Don’t let Satan win.
Remember that I’m fighting by your side,
So never run and never hide!

Chorus:

When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Sometimes things happen that we can’t understand,
But call out to the Father,
take Him by the hand!

Chorus:
When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine, oh you’re mine!

You will always be mine!


The author's comments:
Hi everyone! This is my very fist song that I have ever written!! I hope that you all like this song, and I would Really appreciate it if you could rate and comment, I really want to know how everyone thinks of this! Thanks again!!!

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This article has 468 comments.


on Dec. 22 2009 at 7:29 am
RhiannaRain96 BRONZE, Amsterdam, New York
1 article 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
sweet

oh my gosh that song was great it got to me.I love it.

on Dec. 19 2009 at 12:05 pm
PoertyArtist SILVER, North Tonawanda, New York
5 articles 2 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Why break your own heart for someone that will never break theirs for you"

wow this is really good! i write to and boy did you inspire me!<3 thanks and keep writing your obviously gifted

on Dec. 18 2009 at 3:37 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thanks so much!!! :)

on Dec. 17 2009 at 10:39 pm
thisisBarnes BRONZE, Sin, California
1 article 0 photos 1 comment
God bless. You inspire me, hey, keep it up.

on Dec. 15 2009 at 11:09 am
Internallybeautiful BRONZE, Tilson, New York
3 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass is it about learning how to dance in the rain"

this song was amazing it really reached me i understood what you were trying to say keep writing you will go far with this

DeNiSe BRONZE said...
on Dec. 11 2009 at 8:58 pm
DeNiSe BRONZE, Richmond, Virginia
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments
I really love your song it touched my heart.. keep writing songs, i wish i could hear it being song

candis said...
on Dec. 11 2009 at 12:25 pm
candis, Highlands, Texas
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
the earth trinkles like the dark sky

i really like the song that u wrote keep the great job

on Dec. 8 2009 at 7:04 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thank you all for your sweet comments, they mean so much to me!!!! :) Thanks!

Anomaly BRONZE said...
on Dec. 5 2009 at 12:36 pm
Anomaly BRONZE, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
3 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
You might as well be happy because no one will always really care if you're forever miserable.

It's simple, yet amazing *hearts in eyes*

It's great :]

on Dec. 4 2009 at 10:54 am
I really like this song . I love it when songs arent all about drugs or something that not everyone even has experienced at least with this song i can say that i can realate a lot to and its always good to know your not the only one who has these feeling

on Dec. 4 2009 at 1:04 am
Jossevey808 BRONZE, Captain Cook, Hawaii
1 article 5 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
\"Sing...Dance..Laugh...Love...God....Life\"

aww i luv dis

on Dec. 1 2009 at 10:32 am
pandaLICIOUS SILVER, Portland, Oregon
8 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
“For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.” -Audrey Hepburn

Wow! That's awesome. Reminds me of never giving up and sticking together! Good job, make sure to keep writing! Cause your good at it!!

Grace09 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 29 2009 at 10:18 pm
Grace09 BRONZE, Colorado City, Colorado
3 articles 2 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have a heart of gold, but so does a hard boiled egg." By: I can't remember.

Oh my gosh I loved it! I hope it goes to the magazine, you for sure earned it!

MadHater said...
on Nov. 29 2009 at 8:58 pm
MadHater, Trophy Club, Texas
0 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The only thing we have to fear is fear itself."
-Abraham Lincoln

or

"The price of success is responsibility."
-Winston Churchill

o my gosh this is a beautiful song!!!

i love to sing, and i put a little toon to it, and im gonne be singing it all day now!!!! :D

i was thinking about writing one called Invisible Girl, Not Invisible, I'm Right Here, or something like that :)

its about this girl who has always felt invisible, and she's finally taking a stand!!!

do you think you could help me??

on Nov. 26 2009 at 7:08 am
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Hi Caddy, Happy Thanksgiving! Thank you so much for your comment! The problem is recently I Can't find the right words to come up with a song, and that is "hindering" me to write for right now. :(

Do you have any ideas of how I can come up with a good song that everybody would love? Thanks for commenting, I really love getting comments! :)

Cady_ PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 26 2009 at 2:04 am
Cady_ PLATINUM, Godley, Texas
25 articles 5 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never judge a book by its cover.", and "When you judge another, you do not define them, you define yourself." "Cherish your life." "Love equals eternity."

Hello Monica, I have read some of the comments, and I really like the inspiration people give to you, and I am glad you wantto carry on with your work, which i think you should, by the way HAPPY THANKSGIVING!!!! Also, my name is Cady, my real name lol, I probably won't reply because i am so busy but I hope you wirte more in the future>>>Cady.

on Nov. 25 2009 at 8:55 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Awww, thank you so much!!! :)

on Nov. 25 2009 at 6:59 pm
whisperingofdawn GOLD, Colorado City, Arizona
17 articles 12 photos 87 comments
made me cry. nice work:)

on Nov. 25 2009 at 1:02 pm
KelsiLynn15 SILVER, Dell Rapids, South Dakota
5 articles 0 photos 22 comments
haha yeah.. email me sometime.. kelsiritter_24@hotmail .com

on Nov. 25 2009 at 10:11 am
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thank you soooooo Much!!!!