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You're Mine

August 6, 2009
By distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"


Verse 1:


When you’ve lost your way,
And you don’t know which path to take; Just reach for my hand, and I’ll show you the way
When the storm of life brings you farther than you want to go
Reach for my hand, and I’ll never let go.

Chorus:
When the rain falls,
when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Verse 2:

When trials seem to rip up your dreams,
Don’t give up, and don’t give in
Don’t let Satan win.
Remember that I’m fighting by your side,
So never run and never hide!

Chorus:

When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Sometimes things happen that we can’t understand,
But call out to the Father,
take Him by the hand!

Chorus:
When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine, oh you’re mine!

You will always be mine!


The author's comments:
Hi everyone! This is my very fist song that I have ever written!! I hope that you all like this song, and I would Really appreciate it if you could rate and comment, I really want to know how everyone thinks of this! Thanks again!!!

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thatgirl_93 said...
on Nov. 25 2009 at 8:03 am
wow. this is fantabulous

on Nov. 24 2009 at 8:55 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Haha, you too! :)

on Nov. 24 2009 at 8:48 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thanks! Yup this is my very first song! :) Happy Thanksgiving!

on Nov. 24 2009 at 8:19 pm
KelsiLynn15 SILVER, Dell Rapids, South Dakota
5 articles 0 photos 22 comments
haha! kick butt =]hope you have fun!

futureWriter said...
on Nov. 24 2009 at 6:44 pm
This is a great song! and it's only your first? That's absolutely amazing! keep up the good work!!

on Nov. 24 2009 at 2:47 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

I know, but random is good for the soul! My family have tons of people from church, and school come over, it's so fun! We play football in our huge back yard, and just have a blast!

on Nov. 24 2009 at 2:37 pm
KelsiLynn15 SILVER, Dell Rapids, South Dakota
5 articles 0 photos 22 comments
Haha, so Random!!!! lol I'm working on thanksgiving =[ lol. oh well though because I dont really want to go to my step-moms family's house.. but oh well.. Ill spend Thanksgiving with my grandma after work.. What about yourself? and I like Will Ferril =]

on Nov. 24 2009 at 9:18 am
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Hi Kelsi! :) Have a great thanksgiving! Are you planning on doing anything special? :) Btw, who is your favorite actoress/singer?? Mine is Demi Lovato!! :)

on Nov. 24 2009 at 8:27 am
KelsiLynn15 SILVER, Dell Rapids, South Dakota
5 articles 0 photos 22 comments
haha, mine is Kelsi =] and yeah Np ;) and your piece definetely caught my eye

on Nov. 23 2009 at 8:37 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Awww, thank you so much! Btw, what's your name? My name is Monica! :) Thanks so much again!!!! I hope my work was one that "caught your eye" :)

on Nov. 23 2009 at 5:48 pm
KelsiLynn15 SILVER, Dell Rapids, South Dakota
5 articles 0 photos 22 comments
well geez! you totally just made my day by me making your day! lol.. and yeah I definetely think you should keep writing.. because you totally have potential(SP) to.. theres alot of great artist on here.. but only a few so far have caught my eye..

cheyb88 SILVER said...
on Nov. 23 2009 at 12:55 pm
cheyb88 SILVER, Saint Joseph, Missouri
5 articles 54 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
The lunatic, the lover, the poet, are of imagination of all compact. -William Shakespeare

So don't worry, because I am with you. Don't be afraid, because I am your God. I will make you strong and will help you. I will support you with my right hand that saves you.
Isaiah 41:10

"Expectation is the root of all headaches"- William Shakespeare

"Here take my Elmo" -Chloe'

“If you love something, let it go. If it comes back to you, its yours forever. If it doesn’t, then it was never meant to be.”

Thnaks you too! Enjoy your turkey!

on Nov. 23 2009 at 11:47 am
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thanks! Sure, I will! :) Btw, Happy Thanksgiving!!

cheyb88 SILVER said...
on Nov. 23 2009 at 11:44 am
cheyb88 SILVER, Saint Joseph, Missouri
5 articles 54 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
The lunatic, the lover, the poet, are of imagination of all compact. -William Shakespeare

So don't worry, because I am with you. Don't be afraid, because I am your God. I will make you strong and will help you. I will support you with my right hand that saves you.
Isaiah 41:10

"Expectation is the root of all headaches"- William Shakespeare

"Here take my Elmo" -Chloe'

“If you love something, let it go. If it comes back to you, its yours forever. If it doesn’t, then it was never meant to be.”

I love it its great check out some of my work ;)

on Nov. 23 2009 at 8:13 am
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Hey sweetNsour, thank you so much for your comment, I think that was the best complement anybody has EVER given me!! You really made my day and encouraged me to go on with my song writing!! Well, someday I'll probally put it on Youtube, and Facebook. I don't have a Facebook right now, so that wont really happen for right now, but your free to put it on yours. :) Thanks again for the Amazing comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Btw, I'll be sure to check out your work! :)

on Nov. 22 2009 at 8:50 pm
KelsiLynn15 SILVER, Dell Rapids, South Dakota
5 articles 0 photos 22 comments
Oh wow! great song.. I almost wish I could hear the music to go along with it!! your a kick a--- butt writer=] keep up the fantastic lyrics.. record this and put it on youtube or sometime..it will be a big hit.. I'll put it all over facebook.someones sure to recognize you.. who knows! you could be the next Taylor Swift =] haha, well I have to go help my step-mom with the pumpkin pies.. great song.

on Nov. 20 2009 at 8:11 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thanks!!!!

Nt111193 said...
on Nov. 20 2009 at 6:33 pm
Well my mom has to work and My dad and I are goin over to my grandma's house

Lonleydandy said...
on Nov. 20 2009 at 4:45 pm
:D I like it :D

on Nov. 19 2009 at 8:44 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Okay, that's fine, I'll be waiting!!! Lol :)