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You're Mine

August 6, 2009
By distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"


Verse 1:


When you’ve lost your way,
And you don’t know which path to take; Just reach for my hand, and I’ll show you the way
When the storm of life brings you farther than you want to go
Reach for my hand, and I’ll never let go.

Chorus:
When the rain falls,
when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Verse 2:

When trials seem to rip up your dreams,
Don’t give up, and don’t give in
Don’t let Satan win.
Remember that I’m fighting by your side,
So never run and never hide!

Chorus:

When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Sometimes things happen that we can’t understand,
But call out to the Father,
take Him by the hand!

Chorus:
When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine, oh you’re mine!

You will always be mine!


The author's comments:
Hi everyone! This is my very fist song that I have ever written!! I hope that you all like this song, and I would Really appreciate it if you could rate and comment, I really want to know how everyone thinks of this! Thanks again!!!

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on Mar. 28 2010 at 6:50 pm
windswift DIAMOND, Arvada, Colorado
80 articles 0 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
let it burn, suffering teaches the soul; let it grow, love nourishes the heart.

it is rare that one is able to capture the emotions of anyting in writing like you so often do, the song tells everyone that your ability to write and still keep the emotion alive is very strong, its an area that you should keep very well used and never let dull, because if you let it dull it will never again be a sharp, keep on writing, and dont stop.

 


on Mar. 15 2010 at 2:56 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Yes, PLEASE DO!! I would love to see it too!!! :) Lol :) Thanks for your sweet comment!! :)

on Mar. 15 2010 at 2:21 pm
OMG I love this! You really have a talent! I'm in this intro to broadcast class and I was wondering if I could make a music video for this maybe?

Y. said...
on Mar. 11 2010 at 9:13 pm
thank you so much!! I'm so glad that you all love it! :)

on Mar. 10 2010 at 8:00 am
allie.vgr1994 SILVER, Manton, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People die...so love them everyday,
Beauty fades...so look before it's gone,
Love Changes...but not the love you give,
And if you love, You will never be alone."

"Every day is hard,
Nobody knows how hard it is for me,
every day is kewl tho."

This is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it!!!!!! I wish i could write songs like this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Y. said...
on Mar. 9 2010 at 2:59 pm
Hey! Uh, yea sure, but when you do it, please tell me just so I can see it! :) Thanks! I'm glad you like it!! :) Sure, I'll check it out! :) Peace Out!

on Mar. 9 2010 at 1:13 pm
Dark_Lord_Happy_Pants SILVER, Salem, Indiana
5 articles 2 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And I'm ill with the thought of your kiss, coffee-laced, intoxicating on her lips."--Ashes and Wine by A Fine Frenzy

I love this! I could sing it for you? Yes? No? I'm pretty good at putting music videos together. Let me know. :] Take a look at She is Broken and comment? Pretty please? I'll love you forever. :]

on Mar. 8 2010 at 9:43 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

thanks!! :)

on Mar. 8 2010 at 9:43 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Sure!!!!! :)

on Mar. 8 2010 at 9:25 pm
♥Error♥ BRONZE, Aurora, Oregon
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"I am just a fruitloop in a bowl of cherios."

If you want, your or me could sing this, and I will throw a video on youtube of our work, and give you most of the credit. That is, if you want.

on Mar. 2 2010 at 8:47 am
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thanks! :)

bmmset said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 8:42 am
that was pretty good

on Feb. 26 2010 at 9:44 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thank you so much!! :) I will! :)

laaeira BRONZE said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 7:42 pm
laaeira BRONZE, Kilgore, Texas
2 articles 0 photos 18 comments
i really like the song and hope u continue to write songs and follow your dream. and always have faith in yourself and the lord

on Feb. 21 2010 at 5:57 pm
PeaveLoveMe SILVER, Deland, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I shall never give up, make believe is too much fun."

of course! and no, thank you! (:

on Feb. 21 2010 at 11:48 am
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Cool! Could you let me know when you do, I'd LOVE to see it! :) Thanks!

on Feb. 21 2010 at 11:17 am
PeaveLoveMe SILVER, Deland, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I shall never give up, make believe is too much fun."

omg of course I can put it on youtube! (: THANKS (:

on Feb. 20 2010 at 8:34 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

So glad you like it! Yea Absolutely!!! Do you think you could put it on Youtube when you do it with your friend??? :) I'll be sure to comment and read your songs/poems/stories! Lol :)

on Feb. 20 2010 at 7:32 pm
PeaveLoveMe SILVER, Deland, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I shall never give up, make believe is too much fun."

omg this is beautiful! plz read and comment on mine! <3 (:

Oh, and if i get the chance, would you mind me and a friend writing notes to put it together so we could like sing it all the time? we wouldn't use as ours....just want to put the lyrics with notes (:

on Feb. 17 2010 at 10:53 am
hollyhottell DIAMOND, Redding, California
54 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
poetry is a diary written out loud

i really really liked this....... if i heard that on the radio that would soooooooo help me get through the bad times...this was really good... u should check out my stuff