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Who's To Blame?

I feel like I'm losing you
You're slipping away
So far away, away from me
I don't know what to do
I didn't know it'll be this hard

You knew my intentions
You knew they were good
Agreeing with my views
You helped make the decision
But seems like everything

Chorus:
It's turning around
Falling apart
Don't make a sound
We're too scared
To change what we knew
Thought that we were
Doing the good
We don't know what to do
Now that everything's changed
Will we stay the same?
Who's to blame?

Follow through just do it
We're renewing our claims
Our problem's still the same
Hanging around just to see
How far this could go

How far till someone hurts
Pretending like nothing's change
We fall apart in this game
Feeling like we made a mistake
Either way this will stay




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EeBRA said...
May 27, 2012 at 1:06 am:
hmmmm barrrssss,,,,i want to hear this song,,,it will be the first track in my playlist
 
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PASH15 said...
Apr. 13, 2012 at 11:16 pm:

thats really good!!!!!!

 

 
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ILWriter333This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 27, 2012 at 12:21 am:
I apologize for my last comment, that was meant to go on another piece of work. Sorry, but it's a really good song
 
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ILWriter333This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 27, 2012 at 12:18 am:
Only way to get to you was through a comment on one of your pieces which, btw is AH-MAZING <3 IT. Okay, I've been banned for commenting too much, which totally sucks, so if you get this comment please notify the others. I can still see what you guys are writing though, I just wish there was some way I could communicate through to you guys. Anyways, it sucks, but I'll keep watching you guys chat because I'm really bored, but it sucks I'm banned.
 
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KyoKyo295 said...
Mar. 22, 2012 at 6:51 am:
Hey I really like this song. Can you if its slow or fast or both
 
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MysteryLover said...
Feb. 29, 2012 at 4:12 pm:
I loved your song!!!
 
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StandStrong said...
Feb. 29, 2012 at 1:00 pm:
I love this! It flows so well:)
 
beonca.s replied...
Jun. 18, 2012 at 10:27 am :
this song makes no sence
 
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PerttlesAreMe said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 10:57 pm:
I like it! Haha wish i could come up with Lyrics Like that :)
 
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iluvowls said...
Nov. 11, 2011 at 7:48 am:
i actually started humming to the tune i thought it was...........
 
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BrokenThorn said...
Sept. 6, 2011 at 5:06 pm:
i really like this piece of work,m amazing display of emotions and feelings, I actually found myself singing to myself whie reading it! Comment on my first song on here?
:D
 
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BrokenThorn said...
Sept. 6, 2011 at 5:04 pm:
i really really like this, amazing display of feelings and emotions. Comment on my work? :D
 
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yoitsme said...
Jul. 7, 2011 at 8:26 pm:
You're a really good writer... I really like the song... Don't mean to sound self centred... but could you guys check out my work? I'm new this and I need feedback... my real name is Annie. Covington... Thanks...
 
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kaasha said...
Apr. 26, 2011 at 8:47 pm:
nice song, i loved it.
 
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bookbelle said...
Apr. 17, 2011 at 9:48 pm:
Great job, I'm sining thisin my head whiule I'm reading it!
 
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emmaw15 said...
Apr. 5, 2011 at 6:20 pm:
I can just hear the song! Great job... Nice work!
 
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Emelyn said...
Mar. 14, 2011 at 7:44 pm:
So pretty:) I feel like i'm singing the harmony in my head like I know this song already!
 
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Camii said...
Mar. 14, 2011 at 4:21 pm:

i really liked it !!! good job:)

could you please read my song " this place is called home" or any other of my work ?

 
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bibala774 said...
Mar. 14, 2011 at 1:04 pm:
it was nice :) good job
 
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jordian1 said...
Feb. 25, 2011 at 8:54 am:
i like how easily this song is to relate to. its great!
 
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