Who's To Blame?

September 21, 2009
By indiecaligurl PLATINUM, Long Beach, California
indiecaligurl PLATINUM, Long Beach, California
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I feel like I'm losing you
You're slipping away
So far away, away from me
I don't know what to do
I didn't know it'll be this hard

You knew my intentions
You knew they were good
Agreeing with my views
You helped make the decision
But seems like everything

Chorus:
It's turning around
Falling apart
Don't make a sound
We're too scared
To change what we knew
Thought that we were
Doing the good
We don't know what to do
Now that everything's changed
Will we stay the same?
Who's to blame?

Follow through just do it
We're renewing our claims
Our problem's still the same
Hanging around just to see
How far this could go

How far till someone hurts
Pretending like nothing's change
We fall apart in this game
Feeling like we made a mistake
Either way this will stay


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beonca.s said...
on Jun. 18 2012 at 10:27 am
this song makes no sence

EeBRA BRONZE said...
on May. 27 2012 at 1:06 am
EeBRA BRONZE, Mattapan, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't count the days, make the days count." Mohamed Ali

hmmmm barrrssss,,,,i want to hear this song,,,it will be the first track in my playlist

PASH15 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 13 2012 at 11:16 pm
PASH15 BRONZE, Hinsdale, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
whenever i do something i do it big

thats really good!!!!!!

 


on Mar. 27 2012 at 12:21 am
ILWriter333 GOLD, Hawthorn Woods, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Two woods diverged in a yellow wood and I, I took the one less traveled by, and that has made all the difference

I apologize for my last comment, that was meant to go on another piece of work. Sorry, but it's a really good song

on Mar. 27 2012 at 12:18 am
ILWriter333 GOLD, Hawthorn Woods, Illinois
12 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Two woods diverged in a yellow wood and I, I took the one less traveled by, and that has made all the difference

Only way to get to you was through a comment on one of your pieces which, btw is AH-MAZING <3 IT. Okay, I've been banned for commenting too much, which totally sucks, so if you get this comment please notify the others. I can still see what you guys are writing though, I just wish there was some way I could communicate through to you guys. Anyways, it sucks, but I'll keep watching you guys chat because I'm really bored, but it sucks I'm banned.

KyoKyo295 said...
on Mar. 22 2012 at 6:51 am
Hey I really like this song. Can you if its slow or fast or both

on Feb. 29 2012 at 4:12 pm
MysteryLover BRONZE, Germansville, Pennsylvania
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I loved your song!!!

on Feb. 29 2012 at 1:00 pm
TakingFlightxx GOLD, Bristow, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Believe you can and you're halfway there"

I love this! It flows so well:)

on Feb. 7 2012 at 11:59 am
Kparker27 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
30 articles 17 photos 101 comments

Favorite Quote:
"In the end, it's still best to wait for the one we want rather than settle for what's available. It's still best to wait for the one you love rather than to settle for the one who's around. It's still best to wait for the right person, because life's too short to waste on the wrong one."

really great work!! :) hope you have time to look at mine...

on Nov. 26 2011 at 10:57 pm
PerttlesAreMe BRONZE, Lingle, Wyoming
2 articles 3 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
phantasmagorical Adj.) Being completely and utterly awesome to the point that if you were any more awesome you would internally combust and laugh at the same time or something like that

I like it! Haha wish i could come up with Lyrics Like that :)

on Nov. 11 2011 at 7:48 am
selahoverrated GOLD, Mt Sidney, Virginia
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i actually started humming to the tune i thought it was...........

on Sep. 6 2011 at 5:06 pm
BrokenThorn BRONZE, Blenheim, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"You've lived your life Like a candle in the wind. Not knowing who to cling to when the rain set in"
- Sir Elton John

i really like this piece of work,m amazing display of emotions and feelings, I actually found myself singing to myself whie reading it! Comment on my first song on here?
:D

on Sep. 6 2011 at 5:04 pm
BrokenThorn BRONZE, Blenheim, Other
3 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You've lived your life Like a candle in the wind. Not knowing who to cling to when the rain set in"
- Sir Elton John

i really really like this, amazing display of feelings and emotions. Comment on my work? :D

on Jul. 7 2011 at 8:26 pm
Autumn-Rain SILVER, West Lafayette, Indiana
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You're a really good writer... I really like the song... Don't mean to sound self centred... but could you guys check out my work? I'm new this and I need feedback... my real name is Annie. Covington... Thanks...

kaasha BRONZE said...
on Apr. 26 2011 at 8:47 pm
kaasha BRONZE, Roxbury Crossing, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I am not."- Kurt Cobain

nice song, i loved it.

on Apr. 17 2011 at 9:48 pm
bookbelle SILVER, Okemah, Oklahoma
8 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm not a smart aleck, I'm just so smart everyone else seems to think so."

Great job, I'm sining thisin my head whiule I'm reading it!

emmaw15 said...
on Apr. 5 2011 at 6:20 pm
emmaw15, Minnetonka, Minnesota
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I can just hear the song! Great job... Nice work!

Emelyn BRONZE said...
on Mar. 14 2011 at 7:44 pm
Emelyn BRONZE, Moses Lake, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"The future belongs to those that believe in the beauty of their dreams".

So pretty:) I feel like i'm singing the harmony in my head like I know this song already!

Camii GOLD said...
on Mar. 14 2011 at 4:21 pm
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
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i really liked it !!! good job:)

could you please read my song " this place is called home" or any other of my work ?


on Mar. 14 2011 at 1:04 pm
bibala774 PLATINUM, South Plainfield, New Jersey
38 articles 1 photo 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Our fingerprints don't fade from the lives we've touched"

it was nice :) good job


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