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You're Mine

August 6, 2009
By distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"


Verse 1:


When you’ve lost your way,
And you don’t know which path to take; Just reach for my hand, and I’ll show you the way
When the storm of life brings you farther than you want to go
Reach for my hand, and I’ll never let go.

Chorus:
When the rain falls,
when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Verse 2:

When trials seem to rip up your dreams,
Don’t give up, and don’t give in
Don’t let Satan win.
Remember that I’m fighting by your side,
So never run and never hide!

Chorus:

When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Sometimes things happen that we can’t understand,
But call out to the Father,
take Him by the hand!

Chorus:
When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine, oh you’re mine!

You will always be mine!


The author's comments:
Hi everyone! This is my very fist song that I have ever written!! I hope that you all like this song, and I would Really appreciate it if you could rate and comment, I really want to know how everyone thinks of this! Thanks again!!!

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lilla said...
on Apr. 20 at 8:17 pm
lilla, Irving, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"[M]aybe goodness isn't the absence of bad thoughts or impulses, but the conscious choice to behave according to your moral ideals in spite of them."
-Unkown

I am interested to see what this sounds like with the intended music

on Feb. 27 at 7:50 pm
zoe_vaughn BRONZE, Tenafly, New Jersey
1 article 0 photos 2 comments
This is great, thank you so much. I love how the words flow so smoothly and could go with pretty much any melody

on Feb. 27 at 7:50 pm
zoe_vaughn BRONZE, Tenafly, New Jersey
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This is great, thank you so much. I love how the words flow so smoothly and could go with pretty much any melody

on Jan. 6 at 7:46 pm
Latte_Lover21, Wyckoff, New Jersey
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Remember, amateurs built the Arc. Professionals built the Titanic.'

This was beautiful and inspiring. I can really feel how you expressed yourself, and as a songwriter myself, I think this is an amazing piece of work. Well done, keep it up! I want more! I love how you're not afraid to express the positivism. Whether you believe in the Father or not, He'll always be there! Amazing work!

on Dec. 13 2019 at 11:56 am
Goku_Nativeson, Ogema, Minnesota
0 articles 0 photos 3 comments
noice very noice

on Oct. 11 2019 at 3:49 am
jennynyitya2005, Juru, Other
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Life doesn't happen to you, you happen to Life...

this is good...

opal06 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 2 2019 at 6:03 pm
opal06 BRONZE, Charlotte, North Carolina
3 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"there is both light and dark inside of us, what matters is the part we choose to on, that's who we really are."
-Sirius Black

this is very good! when i read this i started coming up with a tune to it, and the lyrics were easy to find a tune that sounded good!

on Jan. 31 2019 at 8:40 pm
Kittensdamittens SILVER, York, Pennsylvania
8 articles 7 photos 14 comments
I enjoy how it seems kind of aggressive

Elite76 said...
on Jan. 23 2019 at 2:46 pm
Elite76, Grant, Michigan
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment
It is a gate Song Good job.

on Oct. 23 2018 at 10:19 am
BreoniaSpencer SILVER, White Health, Illinois
5 articles 0 photos 1 comment
this is really good can you help me

Eswzem BRONZE said...
on May. 15 2018 at 10:46 am
Eswzem BRONZE, New Castle, Pennsylvania
4 articles 9 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
“For I have a plan for you. A plan to give you peace not for disaster, but a plan to give you hope and a future.” -Our Heavenly Father

I love this so much. Wonderful job.

window said...
on Apr. 19 2018 at 11:41 am
window,
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
LETS GO!

awsome cool i know i can't do that

InkyOwl SILVER said...
on Mar. 7 2018 at 8:56 pm
InkyOwl SILVER, Bloomington, Indiana
9 articles 1 photo 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
Where Words fail, Music speaks.
~Hans Christian Anderson

This is an AMAZING song! I just had surgery, and after I read this I was singing it all day. Great encouragement, and VERY well written! :)

on Feb. 13 2018 at 1:57 pm
CaprisunBrisk BRONZE, Sacramento, California
4 articles 0 photos 3 comments
Good job :) Very descriptive language.

Sha.Johns said...
on Dec. 15 2017 at 2:32 pm
Sha.Johns, PERRY, Iowa
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I don't care about what the other people say about this because you got talent ad don't let anybody tell you differently.

Fantastic poem,very nice

on Nov. 28 2017 at 11:09 am
tootiesfruties,
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shut up no one cares your to positive

on Nov. 28 2017 at 11:08 am
tootiesfruties,
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@Maruchan you suck eggs

on Nov. 28 2017 at 11:08 am
tootiesfruties,
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my heart beats like a drum and my head hurts like if I was hit by a drum stick

on Nov. 28 2017 at 11:06 am
tootiesfruties,
0 articles 0 photos 4 comments
@tootiesfruties you suck eggs


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