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Luna, Terra, Sol MAG

March 28, 2017
By fragmentaations DIAMOND, Middleburgh, New York
fragmentaations DIAMOND, Middleburgh, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“You write beautifully. The inside of your mind must be a terrible place.”


She floats perfectly, a celestial body
among a dark universe,
Weaving herself gracefully between
speechless stars.
The gentle curves of her horizons
Reveal ocean-blue eyes and wind-blown hair.


A beautiful, breathtaking exterior
Shelters her warm heart, deep below
unbreakable surface.
Spinning slowly in her orbit,
She innocently brags, a light for all to see.


I can’t help but admire her,
My eyes continually locked on her
heavenly beauty.
She’s my entire world,
But she revolves around another.


He shines as bright as daylight,
Lighting her skies and warming her skin.
She depends on him, completely captivated,
While I’m eclipsed, pushed into unforgiving shadows.


But gravity cyclically drags me back to her,
No matter how hard I try to stay away.
So I’ll watch the rise and fall of her tides,
Hoping one day she’ll enter my atmosphere.


The author's comments:

A poem in which the point of view is taken by the moon, who adores the earth, but the earth is in love with the sun. 


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on Sep. 15 2017 at 10:59 am
fragmentaations DIAMOND, Middleburgh, New York
58 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
“You write beautifully. The inside of your mind must be a terrible place.”

thank you so much!!

eunoia BRONZE said...
on Jun. 30 2017 at 7:43 pm
eunoia BRONZE, Stamford, Connecticut
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this is so amazing, i love it !!