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Dim and dark
on sunken wings
the melting glow
of tears on skin
and dint of pressure
grasping spare
and turning raw
those gaping eyes
stinging the sight
of what is right in front of us.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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poetrybutterfly123 said...
Oct. 15, 2010 at 7:26 am:
Yor poem is great. although there are not many words it has alot of emotion. I've been through many difficult times in my life and i still cry constantly. thats why i turned to poetry.
 
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JennH said...
Oct. 10, 2010 at 4:59 pm:
this is amazing.
 
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temptedrose said...
Oct. 5, 2010 at 3:25 pm:
This is really good. I can see through everything that you are explaining. And this piece is very descriptive. Nice work.
 
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evdiamond said...
Sept. 27, 2010 at 8:02 pm:
its veryy unique. good poem!
 
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c1496c This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 23, 2010 at 9:35 pm:

Great poem! It's so descriptive and I love the way it's constructed together! And your purpose for writing this poem makes it seem even more real. Good job.=)

Please come view/rate/comment my work, but start from the bottom, that's where the best is.=)

 
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Gothgirl said...
Sept. 14, 2010 at 6:53 pm:
I love it and i want to read more.Don't stop keep writing.
 
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Jellybean9898 said...
Sept. 4, 2010 at 7:12 pm:

i love the description in this piece. pls check out my work if u get the chance. :)

 

 
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ForeverFaith said...
Aug. 13, 2010 at 12:09 pm:
wow, this is amazing i love how poets look at things so much differently. i love your use of words
 
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doodlemonkey said...
Jul. 6, 2010 at 11:23 am:
Your really good! :)
 
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writingsavedmylife This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 2, 2010 at 10:23 am:
I've recently come out of a somewhat slump in my life and this poem truly speaks to me. It's absolutely beautiful and every line made me go ''yes that's exactly what it's like" Very well done. 5 stars
 
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ShenelleCrystalx3 said...
Jun. 29, 2010 at 6:17 pm:
that was a really good short poem , well done . please check my work if you have a chance . :)
 
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Haily_Jeanious said...
Jun. 24, 2010 at 7:32 pm:
This was a wonderfully short poem. And i mean that in a great way!! I dont like reading a poem (escpesssialy really looonng ones!!)  and not understanding them. you put alot of feeling in very little words... Good job! =)
 
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ShenelleCrystalx3 said...
Jun. 17, 2010 at 8:37 pm:
iLove ittttttt <3 ! Keep up the work ! :)
 
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Joyful_angel said...
Jun. 8, 2010 at 8:43 pm:

wow this poem is really good! short, but powerful! great job!! keep writting

excellent job

 
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Amelia_38 said...
May 28, 2010 at 12:47 pm:
WOW!!!!! i love it awesome work i have peoms like this too
 
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demetria said...
May 27, 2010 at 5:43 pm:
i like it. i don't no what's going on but i do like the play on words and sounds of words throughout this poem.
 
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jkcoolz said...
May 22, 2010 at 8:42 pm:
its like a bad thing that you cant quite see at first
 
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starlight26:) said...
May 19, 2010 at 5:11 pm:
I love it. I understand where its coming from. AMAZINGGG
 
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iknowyourheart said...
May 17, 2010 at 4:26 pm:
I like it :)
 
mrs.america replied...
May 19, 2010 at 11:08 am :
its really good
 
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