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Winter Happiness This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.


sitting on my rooftop
in the cold winter air
with my sister
side by side
counting every star
and wishing on the ones
we think are the brightest
until we get so tired
we can barely keep our eyes open.

so we climb down
helping each other along the way
as we trip on the ends
of our baggy sleepy pants
lead each other through
the darkness of the house
skipping over the loose floorboards
trying not to wake mom.

climb underneath the
blankets of our squeaky bed
and listen to her voice
as she tells me everything about her day
until i’m way too tired to reply
and fall asleep ….

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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ImagineLotsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 23 at 2:31 pm:
I love this. It is simple and happiness comes with simple things.
 
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Fia-fiaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 17 at 6:52 pm:
This is really sweet, and true happiness. Happiness comes from the little things, and it is so sweet to see the wonderful connection between the characters. Thank you :)
 
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MoraleAshThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 26, 2011 at 6:43 pm:
I really enjoy the simplicity. Great job!
 
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CbsiegelThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 9, 2011 at 1:35 am:

I can literally see it happening in my head...

Great Job!

 
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DreammerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 12, 2011 at 11:39 am:
Enjoyable piece I enjoyed it:)
 
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Gingersnap777This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 21, 2011 at 10:20 am:
A very touching piece....it reminds me of those times when my sister and I aren't fighting.  It's times like those when we're the best of friends.
 
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Aderes18This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 3, 2011 at 1:40 pm:
I really like this poem!! It's very exquisite! This poem reminds me of really good winter nights that me and my sister have enjoyed!! :) 
 
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YOUNGREVELATIONThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 3, 2011 at 11:14 am:
Lucky you, this is pretty deep and kind of sweet to an extent always imagined something like this never thought it existed, lucky you once again 
 
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Loverboy12This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 30, 2011 at 12:23 am:
I love this poem from the begining becuase snow is my fav season but i also wish me and my sisters were that close
 
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J.P. said...
May 20, 2011 at 12:23 pm:
You know, I wish me and my sister could get along as well as you two.
 
J.P. replied...
May 20, 2011 at 12:39 pm :
T_T I want to cry everytime I read this.
 
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kvater said...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 12:05 pm:
i really enjoyed this poem its something alot of people could relate to and i like the imagery.
 
lala15 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 3:44 pm :
dfefinitely. i want to say everything you did :))
 
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decievinghimesamaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 21, 2011 at 11:48 pm:
I love this piece♥
 
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aboveThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 12, 2010 at 6:50 pm:
i really like this piece of writing. its reminds me soo much of me and my older sister. thank you! now i can share another thing with her...
 
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alanacarlene said...
Jun. 24, 2010 at 4:02 pm:
This is really pretty and I can see it in my mind. I have a question: roughly how long after you submitted this did it take for teenink to approve it and post it online???
 
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Kadamade said...
May 14, 2010 at 9:10 am:
I love this. My sister and I have a great bond like this poem illustrates. It's great! You did a wonderful job, and keep up the good work!
 
roxannemaria29 replied...
Jun. 8, 2010 at 10:58 am :
i like this alot, can really relate and reminise.
 
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Eilatan This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 19, 2010 at 3:38 pm:
i feel the warmth. i feel the happiness. that's what every writer reaches for, and you've achieved it.
 
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ZbHolland said...
Mar. 28, 2010 at 11:11 pm:
Oh my, my, my, This makes me feel like it is a one of a kind night, a peace that is unique only to you, it feels so wonderful, thank you
 
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annkaykay2011This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 12, 2010 at 9:49 am:
Its a bit run onish but all in all its good.
 
Yvaine_96This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 12, 2010 at 8:03 am :
This is gonna sound stupid but i love teenink .com . This the only place where I feel like i belong. Like i just found my family.....Thanks to the creator of this website and to the teens all around the world to fill up the empty space i have been trying to fix all this time
 
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livelovedance said...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 5:57 pm:
i love this peom alot. its really good, please continue writing! if you have a minute, would you please check this out? http ://teenink .com /poetry/all/article/163230/Where-you-stand-currently-is-not-where-you-belong/
 
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life_of_a_leaf said...
Jan. 4, 2010 at 9:58 pm:
i love winter. this is a comforting poem.
 
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Natalie H. This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 8, 2009 at 7:01 pm:
i love your poem! so beautiful!
 
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Kathy.Nguyen said...
Nov. 16, 2009 at 6:23 pm:
i loved your poem. it was amazing and i loved how it is so serene [calm] and i love how it reminds me of simpler times. thanks for the beauty of your writing. =]
 
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Paig3Cagl3 said...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 2:56 pm:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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nuts4duff said...
Oct. 7, 2009 at 11:32 am:
haha, reminds me of me and my sister =)
 
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Twilightnme said...
May 17, 2009 at 9:59 pm:
Nice detail. I wish I could write like that. My sister and i aren't as passionate as u guys either. I love it
 
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prettynpopular said...
Apr. 17, 2009 at 4:05 pm:
i think the poem was great btw you can realy see the love that the sisters share in the poem
 
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Bitsy said...
Apr. 9, 2009 at 10:38 pm:
Love this poem, you should be like some famous author congrats on the publishing!!!
 
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Jacky said...
Apr. 2, 2009 at 11:49 pm:
i can imagine me and my sister doing something like that.
 
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shenorvie r. said...
Mar. 30, 2009 at 3:20 pm:
i love it
 
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alayapoetgirl said...
Mar. 26, 2009 at 7:33 pm:
I can really relate to when my sister talks to me while we're laying down and i get sooo tired and fall asleep on her!;) It's a beautiful poem!
 
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xxJustxxMe This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 21, 2009 at 6:15 pm:
it's a nice poem. Very cute and cool how u and ur sister are so close. Makes me really wish i could climb onto my roof T_T
 
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project827 said...
Mar. 21, 2009 at 2:08 pm:
I love it. Not much else to say.
 
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whatwehavelost said...
Mar. 14, 2009 at 9:57 pm:
you and your sister seem like your really close that must be awesome its a really good poem it tells a story that evry girl would be jealous
thx
 
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kissingdawn331 said...
Mar. 3, 2009 at 8:29 pm:
wow yo and your sister must really bond...iv'e always wanted that ...it is a great poem...thx
 
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