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I watch this flame pass
from match to wick,
gently stepping over
a great divide.
This flame and I
are not so different:
it comes into being from nothingness;
it eats and grows, smokes, and rests.
It gets angry,
destroys homes,
consumes flesh.
Sated, it becomes calm,
retreats into coals,
smoldering through the night.
Domesticated
by a piece of string,
it makes its home in a cave of wax.
It chases the shadows away
and stands watch through the night.
It sways
and dances in the darkness
before it is extinguished
in the blink
of an eye.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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fatesknocking said...
Nov. 1, 2010 at 1:36 pm:
such great imagery and metaphors.
 
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sunnyhunny This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 29, 2010 at 6:31 pm:
Wow, I really like this!  Great metaphor.  My favortie part is the one about stepping over the great divide.
 
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writergirl13 said...
Oct. 21, 2010 at 5:46 pm:
I think everyone's life is like that: first you're happy and everything is going great, and then it just does a 180. Don't worry about people judging you- just write from the heart and write what comes to mind. As for your writing itself, what can I say? Keep writing like that and you'll get far in your writing career.
 
koushik replied...
Oct. 22, 2010 at 6:26 am :

hey i agree with writergirl123...

pen down wat ur heart says...

ur work in more natural... i lyk it

 
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palak said...
Oct. 21, 2010 at 10:33 am:
yep..same with me! my life too is totally like that
 
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JiUrSiTs said...
Oct. 12, 2010 at 5:19 pm:

this is beautiful work

I for one can relate to this

 
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AshenRose said...
Sept. 29, 2010 at 9:22 pm:
THis poem was so eloquent and lovely! Great job.
 
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kay.marie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 7, 2010 at 4:31 pm:

this piece was amazing! keep writing i know exactly how you feel and advise you to cherish the time when life is bright and learn from the times the candle goes out. just know : you can always find a way to re-light the flame.

 

 
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pinkypromise23 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 7, 2010 at 2:54 pm:
woah. just.....woah. thats amazing.
 
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just-a-joy said...
Sept. 7, 2010 at 1:22 pm:
literally this piece is hot i love the way ur words came 2gether
 
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S. said...
Sept. 7, 2010 at 8:56 am:
Beautiful! However, I suggest taking out the line about the flame and you being not so different. The poem expresses that on it's own, so you don't really need to state it directly. But that's just my opinion.
 
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clairexaudrey This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 25, 2010 at 9:12 pm:
129 people have commented on this so I don't want to sound repetitive, but this was absolutely beautiful.
 
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WannaBeWriternumbertwo said...
Jul. 25, 2010 at 12:54 pm:
wow............wonderful.
 
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novelista21 said...
Jul. 25, 2010 at 8:58 am:
I can picture the candle.  this is beautiful, and an awesome poem.  Anyone want to read my stuff?  thanks!
 
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musiclover123 said...
Jul. 4, 2010 at 3:38 am:

wow

Fire has always fascinated me,and this poem does too.Its got hidden meaning and you have to read between the lines to get it all.Its BEAUTIFUL.

<3

 
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Sam_Arnold said...
Jul. 3, 2010 at 7:25 pm:
Nicely done  I like it  
 
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roseann This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 3, 2010 at 6:33 pm:
this was very good. im pretty fascinated with fire so this piece sorta describes myself too. fire is never really tamed and can change in an instant. ;)
 
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Dax533 said...
Jul. 3, 2010 at 6:32 pm:

very good, deserves to be published

 

 
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xovanillatwilightxo This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 3, 2010 at 11:45 am:
this piece was so lovely:] check out my work?
 
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psychokidd said...
Jun. 17, 2010 at 9:34 am:
wow, this is really good, good imagrey, i like the hidden meanings and love how i can relate to them. excellent peiece.
 
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