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I watch this flame pass
from match to wick,
gently stepping over
a great divide.
This flame and I
are not so different:
it comes into being from nothingness;
it eats and grows, smokes, and rests.
It gets angry,
destroys homes,
consumes flesh.
Sated, it becomes calm,
retreats into coals,
smoldering through the night.
Domesticated
by a piece of string,
it makes its home in a cave of wax.
It chases the shadows away
and stands watch through the night.
It sways
and dances in the darkness
before it is extinguished
in the blink
of an eye.

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Mimi15 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 25, 2011 at 9:02 pm:
CHECK OUT MY WORKKK. K, thanks :)
 
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bamboom212 said...
Aug. 25, 2011 at 10:42 am:
Butiful ! (;
 
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WhoWillCareIfEveryoneDied said...
Aug. 25, 2011 at 8:54 am:
Beautiful. i have work on here i would really appreciate it if you guys can check it out and tell me what you think. Thanks :)
 
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cookiegirl said...
Aug. 25, 2011 at 4:50 am:
I like how you use cnadle light to represent your life: )  Your words are powerful.  
 
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live-laugh-love said...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 1:25 pm:
This is very lovely and moving. I can feel where you're coming from. I love it.
 
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RhythmAndRhyme said...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 12:25 pm:
Great use of description and comparison. I totally felt like I was this flame, and it was me....very cool.
 
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Alan said...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 6:15 am:
This is lovely, touching. I feel you. beautiful piece!
 
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Ellimee said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 11:55 am:
I'm labeling this unique, interesting, realistic, creative.... oh, and five-stars!
 
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tsinger07 said...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 3:00 am:
I understand. I feel what you feel. This is beautiful! Simple metaphor but amazingly written.
 
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HarryPotterNerd11 said...
Jun. 20, 2011 at 10:23 pm:
Impressive! It gives a powerful perspective on life and gives a figurative life to flame. Very, very Impressive... No other word except maybe Wow(!). :)
 
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K.M.S.Shear said...
Jun. 20, 2011 at 8:04 am:
I love the way you describe life.
 
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Monkee63 said...
May 26, 2011 at 10:22 am:
This poem is really relatable...I know how that feels to go from being bright and happy to dark and sad.
 
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PrettyLittleDarling said...
May 1, 2011 at 1:10 pm:

perfect is the way to describe this peiece

 

 
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Apeggy said...
Apr. 16, 2011 at 5:31 pm:
I think this poem describes everyones life at one point in time. Great wording, i love it!
 
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little-miss-mistakes said...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 9:18 pm:
love this love this love love love this!!!! GREAT JOB!!!
 
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justanotherteenwriter said...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 2:19 pm:
your my new fav person. ever. i really liked this because you said what alot of depressed people cant find the words to say. myself included. thank you(:
 
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GraceSanchez said...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 1:34 pm:
This poem is nicely written :D ilove it.
 
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massiekur said...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 12:56 pm:
beautiful. it's the perfect comparison.
 
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LiveInTheMoment said...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 12:36 pm:
This poem was beautifully written. I love your writing style! If you can, please check out and comment on my first poem, The Girl Inside. Thanks!
 
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to.hold.the.sun This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 24, 2011 at 8:15 pm:

Amazing :) I actually wrote something similar to this, about how happiness is about a match, how it flares brightly at the beginning then dies. It's still pending approval though :/

Anyway, yours is great. Very sensory and descriptive. And I completely agree.

 
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