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Final Goodbye

March 30, 2013
By HopethroughFaithInGod BRONZE, Perry, Michigan
HopethroughFaithInGod BRONZE, Perry, Michigan
2 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
"For every action there is an equal and opposite reaction" - Issac Newton (i think?)


Have you ever felt alone...
Like a cold, cold stone with no where to call home...
The worst part is that your actions caused this hell...
You've always been selfish since the day you were born...
You question yourself if there's a reason your alive...
Then suddenly there comes someone who gives you light...
you don't know what you had until its gone...
You take the light for granted cause your too blind to see...
That light made you the happiest you will ever be...
Now wheres your code of honor, you neglected what you had...
You now have nothing and you know its your fault...
You cant stop crying and your heart wont stop bleeding...
Now hope and faith is all you have...
Your borderline dead and you can't hardly smile...
Your soul dies as you realize how much pain you've caused...
Your selfishness got the best of You...
Now your all alone and you don't know what to do...
There's a .45 in your hands and its staring back at you...
You remember all those days you caused her hurt...
Your finger squeezes the trigger...
A lone tear hits the floor as all the angels start to cry...


The author's comments:
Sometimes we all get to that point where we wonder "why am I alive?" or "Whats the point of me living"
This is just my experiance with it.

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on Apr. 11 2013 at 7:09 pm
HopethroughFaithInGod BRONZE, Perry, Michigan
2 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
"For every action there is an equal and opposite reaction" - Issac Newton (i think?)

dont weep with the angels! All is well :P

on Apr. 11 2013 at 7:09 pm
HopethroughFaithInGod BRONZE, Perry, Michigan
2 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
"For every action there is an equal and opposite reaction" - Issac Newton (i think?)

tahnk you very much sorry my poems are "different" than normal peoples :P

on Apr. 11 2013 at 3:07 pm
MariahPotter PLATINUM, Lansing, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
“We dream in our waking moments, and walk in our sleep.” -scarlett letter

Frightening but amazing

on Apr. 6 2013 at 2:29 pm
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 3 photos 433 comments

Favorite Quote:
" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"

I'm weeping with the angels and this poem way to go :3 and your right we all feel this somedays some more than others :3 keep it up