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Why do people have to lie
Why do people have to hurt you
Why are people jerks
Why do people love hurting you
Why is everything so hard
Why is everything so complicated
Why don't people tell you the truth
Why do people make life so painful
Why do people ruin your trust
Why
Why can't you trust without pain
Why can't people tell the truth
Why do people have to lie
Why does everyone have to hurt you
Why does everyone have to leave you
Why when you need them most
Why do people lead you on
Why do people back stab you
Why does the world seem to hurt you
Why does it seem everyone hate you
Why are people created to hurt you
Why are all people the same
Why can't one person be there
Why can't someone care
Why can't someone listen
Why does it hurt so much?



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MonsterGirl2000This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 12:42 pm:
thank you!!!!!
 
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Sparkle1popsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 15 at 8:01 pm:
Thank you for this poem! It really made me thik about the things you said. 
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MonsterGirl2000This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 27 at 7:10 pm :
Welcome I often find myself asking these.
 
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MonsterGirl2000This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 15 at 7:58 pm:
Thank you!
 
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WriterWannaBeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 13 at 9:34 pm:
I liked this a lot; you captured a lot of emotion in it. It's very relateable as I'm sure many people, including myself, have felt this way and asked these questions. The only thing I would comment on is how you have the one lone "why" in the middle. It seems out of place. Maybe create a few stanzas and separate them by single "why"s? Other than that, good work and keep writing! (=
 
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zendayaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 11 at 3:56 pm:
this is exactly how i feel too i love it adn i sont have any answers and i am looking for my own aswell
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MonsterGirl2000This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
today at 12:41 pm :
if i can help please tell me
 
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Zoya_KhanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 4 at 11:31 am:
I don't have any answer but I like this poem :) :) :)
 
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