Salty Showers

August 10, 2012
By towonderland BRONZE, La Canada, California
towonderland BRONZE, La Canada, California
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Everytime she looks up from
her besties Ben & Jerry,

The weatherman is smiling
But his eyes are lost and his voice his dead

Another rainy day ahead, he says
Again? She groans

It is a muddy Sunday morning:
The sun is hiding
and the birds aren't chirping.

Her eyes are too puffy
Another spoonful of chocolatey goodness

She wonders when he'll call.


The author's comments:
I was listening to Almost Lover by A Fine Frenzy & Foundations by Kate Nash. This is the result. We've all had these days, haven't we?

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Geena BRONZE said...
on Aug. 11 2012 at 7:00 pm
Geena BRONZE, No Wanting To Tell, Other
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Your welcome :) Keep Writing

on Aug. 11 2012 at 11:37 am
towonderland BRONZE, La Canada, California
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Thank you so much, Geena! This made my day. :)

Geena BRONZE said...
on Aug. 10 2012 at 10:32 pm
Geena BRONZE, No Wanting To Tell, Other
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I really enjoyed reading this. It's different and pulls you in. Well done


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