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Salty Showers

Everytime she looks up from
her besties Ben & Jerry,

The weatherman is smiling
But his eyes are lost and his voice his dead

Another rainy day ahead, he says
Again? She groans

It is a muddy Sunday morning:
The sun is hiding
and the birds aren't chirping.

Her eyes are too puffy
Another spoonful of chocolatey goodness

She wonders when he'll call.





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Geena said...
Aug. 10, 2012 at 10:32 pm
I really enjoyed reading this. It's different and pulls you in. Well done
 
towonderland replied...
Aug. 11, 2012 at 11:37 am
Thank you so much, Geena! This made my day. :)
 
Geena replied...
Aug. 11, 2012 at 7:00 pm
Your welcome :) Keep Writing
 
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