June 4, 2011
As in I love you
like how the moon loves the stars
burning brightly with love
you are my world
My heaven, my sanity
as in I love you

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Love.Hate.Passion. said...
Dec. 30, 2011 at 6:43 pm
This poem is a massive improvement from your other two. I feel like this one had meaning to it and it was sweet. Your last two lines seemed awkward and it would have flowed better if you left them out. Keep it up! ***
DarkenRose replied...
Dec. 31, 2011 at 12:41 pm
Thanks, really it does? Huh, I'll also have to fix that lol:). Thank you again:D
CarrieAnn13 said...
Jul. 1, 2011 at 6:18 pm
For once I'm glad I took French for two years!  I love this poem; it perfectly describes love.  Great job!
DarkenRose replied...
Jul. 1, 2011 at 6:48 pm
Aww! Thanks! My older sister told me what it ment and I thought it was beautiful even though I couldn't say it right, lol!
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