A Temptation

April 14, 2011
A temptation so sweet

Angels Weep

The simple act
Holds this pain so unrelenting

Yet you must shed the tear

And you close those eyes


Oh how they cry


Oh how you smile

And die.

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xximjustmexx said...
Jun. 1, 2011 at 4:47 pm
I liked it. It's very simple, but it says a lot. Good job. Keep writing.
brax34 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 1, 2011 at 1:21 pm
very very good! nearly perfect! be more confident in yourself, though, thats half the battle!  (You might want to think about making the last line just a tiny bit closer to the rest of the poem, i almost missed it:)
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