Lonely

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I can tell you,
Why she feels this way,
Everyday.
Her mother and father...
They are ever so proud of this girl.
Shes an amazing role model to others.
She does everything possible.
Be Best of the Best,
Thee elite of the elite.
It's not easy.
Pressure...
Pressure..
Pressure.
It's easier said...
Easier said than done.


CRACK!
Someday...





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413rlm said...
Dec. 14, 2010 at 12:08 pm
Your poem could be about anyone that is trying to reach a goal and does make an important statement. "I can tell you, Why she feels this way, everyday", this girl is under pressure but no one else can see what she is going through. The repetition of "it's easier said.. easier said than done" could be reworded because it can be confusing to read. 
 
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