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My Dream

November 23, 2010
By Peniel BRONZE, Syracuse, New York
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Baseball and Softball both with a ball and a bat
-size different-
But I hit a home run...wow.
The crowd goes wild
Everyone's screaming my name,
but I just hear my mom
the loudest, she must be happy, :)
I dreamed so much for this
day to come and worked so hard
but I keep hearing my moms voice and I'm getting annoyed
and I feel someone shaking me...
and I wake up.
It was all a dream.
Well, maybe I can keep trying
and it will come true :)

The author's comments:
I play softball for my school and I am not that good I'm fast and i can catch the ball most of the times but what seems to really matter is how good you bat. I used to be good at bating in the beginning but then after about a week of playing i could not bat after I thought about it I have concluded that it was maybe because I was shy and wasnt sure of myself. But that is my dream to hit a home run,against a really good team mostly.
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