Burst Up In The World

November 16, 2010
By , putnam, CT
When I dive into the lake,
All at once I feel free,
Swimming with the fish,
My hair floating around me,
It's so calm and refreshing,
Not a sound can be heard,
Just me and the water,
The sand in my toes,
Sunlight glinting off the water,
Until I burst up in the world.

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TheMusicalFaery said...
Dec. 6, 2010 at 5:37 am
Great poem, I love it! I know exactly what you're talking about. ;) I can't wait to swim again next summer! :D
lostnhim said...
Dec. 5, 2010 at 7:16 pm
This brings me back to summer days. I love to swim, and can relate with the feelingin of being under the water, and then bursting up into the air. Great job with describing it. (: I really like your poem.
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