Bleeding Red and Crying Blue

October 17, 2010
By LilStinka SILVER, Lynden, Washington
LilStinka SILVER, Lynden, Washington
5 articles 4 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Advice is what we ask for when we already know the answer but wish we didn't. - Erica Jong
Tis an ill cook that cannot lick his own fingers. - Shakespeare


Bleeding Red and Crying Blue
Sick of being pushed around by you
Tired of you stepping all over me
the Hurt you caused almost Crippling

you’re Friendship was False
our Jokes were a Lie
you Never cared whether or not I Survived

it was all about You, always what You say
you’ll never know what you made me pay
you Stabbed me in the back again and again
you Lied to my face
i know you’ll Never change

i see now, through the Hypnotic glass
the Rainbow of colors the shiny Flash
that lights up a room for a Brief moment
fake Light filled with Dark, all good is absent

i’m Bleeding Red and Crying Blue
won’t Trust any friend again
all because of what You do
all because of YOU


The author's comments:
I learned the hard way that although you'd like to think people are honorable and trustworthy, that's not always the case. Once you've found a trued friend, make sure you hold on.

p.s. tips for writing are encouraged :D

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on Nov. 1 2010 at 2:51 pm
LilStinka SILVER, Lynden, Washington
5 articles 4 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Advice is what we ask for when we already know the answer but wish we didn't. - Erica Jong
Tis an ill cook that cannot lick his own fingers. - Shakespeare

Thanks so much! yah, I thought we were best friends, but I guess we know how that ended, it hurt, but writing helped. :)

on Nov. 1 2010 at 7:47 am
Alisha62293 BRONZE, Warwick, Rhode Island
2 articles 1 photo 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A man who dares to waste one hour of time has not discovered the value of life." Charles Darwin

This was amazing. I loved your word choice. Keep up the good work, i would love to read more of your work! I was in an abusive relationship, and reading this really made me cry. There were times where i didnt think i would make it out alive, but i did. I hope you find a sense of security, not only in your writing, but in life as well. Best of luck to you!

If you get a chance, take a look at my work.



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