An Issue of Pride This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

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He collapses and begins to weep.
After an uncountable amount of time
he wipes his red eyes and dries his tear-stained cheeks.
He checks his voice; no croaking.
Back downstairs he spies his target.
No apologies tonight.
The yelling continues and the fight drags on.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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Brittany=) said...
Jul. 22, 2009 at 7:44 pm
nice, short, precise, and intense ! Love it.
 
kiwi12 said...
Jul. 22, 2009 at 2:41 am
perfect to the point.
 
Hay_Wire This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 21, 2009 at 2:52 am
wow. oh my gosh. that totally stopped me. i love that. that has got to be the best work ive read in a long time. just wow.

and sucha truthful topic. wow.
 
bookworm:) This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 20, 2009 at 7:41 pm
It's very easy to understand and straight to the point.
 
annkaykay2011 said...
Jul. 20, 2009 at 8:05 am
Its short, but then it has its sharp intense emotion in there too,
 
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