July 24, 2010
Your confusing me with your feelings
Your confusing me with your names
Your confusing me in my mind
Your separating my from my life
Your making me wounder to hard
Your just to hard to figure out
I cant tell what your trying to send me
I cant tell if your in love with me
Your lost in love also! </3

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EmotionsCrave said...
Feb. 21, 2011 at 6:48 pm
Thanks i know I have made mistakes in my poems...but personally you don't have to like it because I love them I put my feelings in them and if you say It wasn't as good as you wanted it to be then im sorry im not more emotional in it...but you go poor you're heart out into the poems you make...
Jessica L. said...
Sept. 4, 2010 at 4:08 pm
Thanks I will keep writing and ya i write lots of poems never really knew they were Hot but thanks
Jessica L. said...
Sept. 4, 2010 at 4:06 pm
Thank you i srry i had rushed i will make the others better if it annoys some ppl that much lol and yes i will read some of your stuff
just-a-joy said...
Aug. 13, 2010 at 11:32 am
keep writting bec this is hot ;)
sunrise_faerie said...
Aug. 12, 2010 at 10:58 pm
it was pretty good... but you used the wrong yours..... you need to spell it you're. you also used the wrong to. two of them need to be too. sorry, that distracted me.... it was okay other than that. care to read my stuff?
DiamondsIntheGrass This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 12, 2010 at 2:35 pm
love the end, but most of it just isnt as flowy as i really like it.  srry.
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