Confused!!

July 24, 2010
By CarveTheMoon PLATINUM, New City, New York
CarveTheMoon PLATINUM, New City, New York
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Favorite Quote:
If music be the food of love play on!


Your confusing me with your feelings
Your confusing me with your names
Your confusing me in my mind
Your separating my from my life
Your making me wounder to hard
Your just to hard to figure out
I cant tell what your trying to send me
I cant tell if your in love with me
Or
Your lost in love also! </3



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on Feb. 21 2011 at 6:48 pm
CarveTheMoon PLATINUM, New City, New York
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If music be the food of love play on!

Thanks i know I have made mistakes in my poems...but personally you don't have to like it because I love them I put my feelings in them and if you say It wasn't as good as you wanted it to be then im sorry im not more emotional in it...but you go poor you're heart out into the poems you make...

on Sep. 4 2010 at 4:08 pm
CarveTheMoon PLATINUM, New City, New York
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If music be the food of love play on!

Thanks I will keep writing and ya i write lots of poems never really knew they were Hot but thanks

on Sep. 4 2010 at 4:06 pm
CarveTheMoon PLATINUM, New City, New York
30 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
If music be the food of love play on!

Thank you i srry i had rushed i will make the others better if it annoys some ppl that much lol and yes i will read some of your stuff

on Aug. 13 2010 at 11:32 am
just-a-joy GOLD, Indianapolis, Indiana
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Eminem: Success is my only option, failure's not

keep writting bec this is hot ;)

on Aug. 12 2010 at 10:58 pm
sunrise_faerie GOLD, Fredericksburg, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
things are only as dark as you make them.
there is always beauty in every situation. look for it and you will see.
smile; sometimes it's all that will keep you from crying.

it was pretty good... but you used the wrong yours..... you need to spell it you're. you also used the wrong to. two of them need to be too. sorry, that distracted me.... it was okay other than that. care to read my stuff?

on Aug. 12 2010 at 2:35 pm
DiamondsIntheGrass GOLD, Martinsville, New Jersey
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Worry is simply a misuse of the imagination.

love the end, but most of it just isnt as flowy as i really like it.  srry.


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