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Loves Me

Loves me
Loves me not
Loves me
Loves me not
Thoughts swirling round my head
In never ending circles
Loves me
Loves me not
Says he does
Does he really?
Around and around
Until I am dizzy
I guess I will never really know
If he loves me
Or loves me not



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SilverLuna said...
Sept. 30, 2010 at 5:18 pm:
This makes a very eleoquent point, it's like one of those ten-cent phrases. It's not worth what it used to be. I loved this. Good Job!
 
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Sept. 30, 2010 at 5:19 pm :
:)))))))))) thanks for all your comments!!!!!!!
 
SilverLuna replied...
Sept. 30, 2010 at 5:22 pm :
It's the least that I can do!(: I really enjoy your poetry. It's...sweet, i guess would fit it well. Sweet and well thought out. Always write!(:
 
ThatClarinetPersonThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 30, 2010 at 5:22 pm :
ha ha. thanks :)
 
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