Forever

June 29, 2010
By TyBoi-ink SILVER, Danbury, Connecticut
TyBoi-ink SILVER, Danbury, Connecticut
7 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Maybe my life would have been better if you had never intruded. Maybe thats just the way i cope with... cope with not having you." -By Me!!


Forever
That's what we promised
Forever friends
And always together we promised
to Lways have each others back

We let each other down and now we're sitting here looking distressed
When once Upon a time we always impressed

Forever
Thats the pledge we made
In crowd of confusion
Our friendship
No,
Our love died

Goodbye,


Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 3 comments.


on Jul. 23 2010 at 10:44 am
TyBoi-ink SILVER, Danbury, Connecticut
7 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Maybe my life would have been better if you had never intruded. Maybe thats just the way i cope with... cope with not having you." -By Me!!

Thanks, 

 and yes the ending was suspose to be incomplete to show its not really over. There is another parto this poem that completes and finishes it but its taken so  long to get one acepted i would prefer to have them all get down before i sumbit any new work, two more befor all six are up and ill post the other half. =)

 


on Jul. 23 2010 at 12:00 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Wow i lvoe it!! reminds me of pretty little liars!!  if you could please rate and comment on my work that wuld be awesome!!! especially to anonymous!!! thanks and ur really good!!!

on Jul. 22 2010 at 4:07 pm
Eternally17 SILVER, Dubai, Other
5 articles 7 photos 99 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There exists no heaven and no hell, nothing to look forward to after we have gone to ashes; live every moment NOW, and make things happen the way you want to in this lifetime; not the next."

I really like the whole theme of the poem :)

However, the ending sounds a little incomplete, was it meant to be that way?

Well written, tho :)



SciArc

MacMillan Books

Aspiring Writer? Take Our Online Course!