Forever

Forever
That's what we promised
Forever friends
And always together we promised
to Lways have each others back

We let each other down and now we're sitting here looking distressed
When once Upon a time we always impressed

Forever
Thats the pledge we made
In crowd of confusion
Our friendship
No,
Our love died

Goodbye,





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crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 12:00 am
Wow i lvoe it!! reminds me of pretty little liars!!  if you could please rate and comment on my work that wuld be awesome!!! especially to anonymous!!! thanks and ur really good!!!
 
SKN17 said...
Jul. 22, 2010 at 4:07 pm

I really like the whole theme of the poem :)

However, the ending sounds a little incomplete, was it meant to be that way?

Well written, tho :)

 
TyBoi-ink replied...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 10:44 am

Thanks, 

 and yes the ending was suspose to be incomplete to show its not really over. There is another parto this poem that completes and finishes it but its taken so  long to get one acepted i would prefer to have them all get down before i sumbit any new work, two more befor all six are up and ill post the other half. =)

 

 
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