I wonder....

June 17, 2010
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I wonder how it feels
To be swept into a churning sea.
To feel the salt water fill your pours
And rocky sand burn your feet.
I wonder what goes through your mind
Do you think about your life?
Your religion?
The good that you have done?
The lies you have told?

I wonder what it feels like to be happy.
To feel satisfied.
To feel like you’ve done the very best.
I wonder if god ever felt that way.
I wonder if it is the best feeling.
To feel like no can top you.
I wonder if you get that feeling
As the ocean swallows you in a riptide.
I wonder if you feel so good when you drown, that you don’t really care you did.

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crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 12:34 am
This is really good!! i can feel the emotion!!! if you could please rate and comment my work that would be great!! thanks and u r really good dont stop!!!
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