I wonder....

June 17, 2010
By Scoobymeg BRONZE, Gouldsboro, Pennsylvania
Scoobymeg BRONZE, Gouldsboro, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
If being an egomaniac means I believe in what I do and in my art or music, then in that respect you can call me that... I believe in what I do, and I'll say it.
----John Lennon

I wonder how it feels
To be swept into a churning sea.
To feel the salt water fill your pours
And rocky sand burn your feet.
I wonder what goes through your mind
Do you think about your life?
Your religion?
The good that you have done?
The lies you have told?

I wonder what it feels like to be happy.
To feel satisfied.
To feel like you’ve done the very best.
I wonder if god ever felt that way.
I wonder if it is the best feeling.
To feel like no can top you.
I wonder if you get that feeling
As the ocean swallows you in a riptide.
I wonder if you feel so good when you drown, that you don’t really care you did.

The author's comments:
This thought came to me as I jumped into a lake so deep, I thought I wouldn't make it to the top.

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on Jul. 15 2010 at 12:34 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

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