Paradoxical Paradise

June 14, 2010
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Like the inescapable pull of the north pole of a magnet to the south,
Like the inexorible bond formed between a mother and her daughter at first sight;
Like those precious drops of water that the weary traveller seeks,
Like the myriad of colours and those pinpricks of light that the blind boy dreams.
Like the pearly mists of the dawn that obscure yet beautify,
And the fiery sunset that cause the heart to leap out with joy,
Like the sighting of the new moon,
And the budding of spring's first blossom;
You are who I breathe for, looking forward to as the days race by;
Your touch is what I long for, as I seek comfort in your loving arms;
A lifetime with you is what I earnestly pray for, as we greet each tomorrow together;
A place in your heart is my one great wish, for you have inevitably stolen mine.

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Zack O Lite said...
Jul. 22, 2010 at 5:45 am
Anaalulu and also u both started u both na!! +p
analulu :p said...
Jul. 21, 2010 at 7:44 am

you know what ..
you might as well start writing a book :p



SKN17 replied...
Jul. 21, 2010 at 7:45 am

ahahaha :D

Thank you :)

I will,, and if I am lucky enough maybe it shall be published ;P

analulu :p replied...
Jul. 21, 2010 at 7:48 am
andd ill be the first to read it x)
SKN17 replied...
Jul. 21, 2010 at 7:54 am
I would dedicate it to you man! :D
analulu :p replied...
Jul. 21, 2010 at 2:55 pm
aww you are so sweeet :)
Zack Ö lite said...
Jul. 12, 2010 at 6:15 am

VEry BEAUTiFuL WRiTtEn.....

Realy it sends out a the who ever ur writhing this to.....

hope..ur dreams as expained by the poem comes true

SKN17 replied...
Jul. 12, 2010 at 8:30 am

What you have said means so much to me...

Thank you :)

I hope they do, too! :)

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