Inside your atmosphere

February 5, 2010
By rachel9008 BRONZE, Lorton, Virginia
rachel9008 BRONZE, Lorton, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"When you make peace with yourself, you make peace with the world."

I wanted to be the space between your breaths;
I wanted to be the stillness between your thoughts,
the quiet void that encompasses my mind.
I longed to be the air traveling through your technicolor
atmosphere; I would ruffle your hair, I'd keep you alive.
I would wrap around you oh so naturally,
molding into your crystalline skin;
and all the while you would just be,
never aware of the empty spaces inside and all around you
that I was so prepared to fill.

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on Jun. 1 2011 at 12:50 am
HanaMizz14 GOLD, Auburn, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
Be happy because you'll never know when an EMT will be listening to your heart not beat.

Wow. That was so well put. The descriptions are so vivid, I can imagine everything. I can't even think of anything else to say but wow.


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