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Have you ever written something
just to
fill
up
the
page
?
Random nonsense that no makes
sense.
Everyone has done it
or I could be lying,
but you'd never know that
would you?
Unless you are one of
them,
one of
those
people who write with meaning
and heart.
I guess
they
have never listened to
Tina Turner.
I have,
but I could be lying about that too.
I might be an ant
for all you know.
Granted a very large ant…
or a very small computer
you'll still never know,
but do we ever know anything?

Too serious?
I agree.
Lets never speak of this
again.



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Supernova7 said...
Jun. 16, 2010 at 12:38 pm:
Lol:) This is hilarious I love your writing style it's very unique:)
 
Jandee replied...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 1:59 pm :
Thank you very much! I'm not really sure of my writing style, myself. I think I'm still constantly evolving, so I always look forward to my next piece.
 
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tdnarb said...
Jun. 15, 2010 at 11:24 pm:
Haha this is a very good poem.  It made me laugh!
 
Jandee replied...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 1:59 pm :
That means a lot to me.
 
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AprilBlue said...
Jun. 15, 2010 at 7:57 pm:
I L.O.V.E. this, legitimatley it's totally brilliance. I really really like the first few lines, great job :D
 
Jandee replied...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 2:00 pm :
Wow. Thank you so much! That means a lot.
 
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CobyHorseLoveThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 12, 2010 at 9:17 pm:
Vary Different!!! I love it! Hey Check out my photos and stories thank you
 
Jandee replied...
Jun. 13, 2010 at 1:06 pm :
Thank you so much for taking the time to comment! I'll go take a look.
 
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DreamWriter15 said...
Jun. 2, 2010 at 5:52 pm:
Ahh!  I love this!  You're a natural writer, and you put your spark and wit into your writings! Keep it up!  :)
 
Jandee replied...
Jun. 10, 2010 at 3:03 pm :
Thank you so much for your encouraging words! I will be sure to keep writing.
 
DreamWriter15 replied...
Jun. 10, 2010 at 6:47 pm :
You'd better cause if you don't.....the world would be missing something, and I'd find out where you live and come after you and force you to keep writing, because something like that is a sin to keep unwritten ;)
 
Jandee replied...
Jun. 11, 2010 at 2:24 pm :
Wow. Thank you so much. That makes me feel so good knowing that you want me to keep writing so much (but it would be creepy if you came to my house and forced me to write). xD
 
DreamWriter15 replied...
Jun. 11, 2010 at 3:35 pm :

Lol, no, not creepy at all O.o...

 

I think that more people concentrate on being all "Artistic" in their writing and deep and emotional other than just stating their point.  I'm kinda guilty of this, but it seems too many people think they're doing it so good when they're not, and others tell them they are, and it gets kind of annoying.  You're just short, sweet, and to the point, with a little meaning and wit thrown in.  I wish more people wrote like that.

 
Jandee replied...
Jun. 12, 2010 at 3:09 pm :

Oh yeah... totally not creepy. lol.

 

Thank you so much! I don't really stick big words in my poems or make them long/drag them out because, honestly, I don't like to read poems like that. I can't concentrate on them and lose interest, so I figure there must be other people like that out there. I also think that might be way some teenagers and such don't like reading or writing poetry. I don't know, that's just my view on things.

 
DreamWriter15 replied...
Jun. 12, 2010 at 7:51 pm :

Well, that's good that you're being yourself.  Keep at it, it's very refreshing to read things like this :)

 

(btw, i could totally facebook you...)

 
Jandee replied...
Jun. 13, 2010 at 1:06 pm :
What now?          
 
DreamWriter15 replied...
Jun. 13, 2010 at 9:37 pm :

what now what?

 

 
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SwordGirl said...
May 31, 2010 at 11:10 am:
Ha ha! This is great! It's one of my favorite pieces of poetry here, and it should definately be in the magazine! And I love the title. :)
 
Jandee replied...
Jun. 10, 2010 at 3:03 pm :
Thank you so much. I'm glad you like it so much.
 
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crawfordkid This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 8, 2010 at 3:04 pm:
That was great, I loved it! Particularly the Tina Turner reference. ;-) Nice one!
 
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