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please dont cry

January 3, 2010
By Anonymous

i can't see, i cant breath, this machine is keeping me alive, i'm awhere of my surroundings, but i don't know whats going on, my mom, dad, and brothers surround me, i feel there tears on my muscular arms, feeling so cold, i wish i could just die, they will move on evenctually, everyone will, except on person, she loves me still, but thinks i don't know, just cut this machine let me die, when i'm gone, please dont cry.

© Anonymous

The author's comments:
my colse friend was in the hospital because he was not eating so all you people out there that dont eat please start i may not know you but i dont want you to end up like my friend. this is kind of i guess his point of view when he was in the hospital
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