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You will die when
The sky bleed ashes
The ocean dries up
The world crumbles beneath our feet
We breathe until there is no more air
As in heaven as on earth
We have been dieing since of birth
The streets paved with blood
Pain fills the air
Choking and drowning
Till no more life
Angels come down
Kill us all
From within our sins
Lies a pile of burdens
Cash in our holy lives
For ones impure
Destroyed and smashed
Our lives and our dreams
Start over again
Fresh and clean





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BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 26, 2010 at 8:55 pm
I read this sucker before. I like the you're gonna die part. love that part. just love it. like the imagery too. "mommy the sky is bleeding ashes".-"thats nice honey".
 
Shahed said...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 8:09 pm
"our lives and our dreams start over again, fresh and clean" my fav!
VERY GOOD! love it
 
ForbiddenAngel said...
Feb. 25, 2010 at 3:22 pm
WOW THAT WAS AMAZiNG!!! I LOVED THE RYTHM!!!! The imagery !!! U have quite the talent with poetry :D.
 
***3Lli3*** replied...
Feb. 26, 2010 at 2:37 pm
thanks :) do u have anything posted.?
 
pampalooga This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 20, 2010 at 2:19 pm
...woa. that was so interesting! fantastic idea, too. it had rhythm and a certain flow that made it all that better. grrreat job!
 
***3Lli3*** replied...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 9:16 am
thanks a lot :)
lol do u have any poems in the mag yet.?
 
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