Earth is falling

December 20, 2009
By Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
47 articles 1 photo 133 comments

You will die when
The sky bleed ashes
The ocean dries up
The world crumbles beneath our feet
We breathe until there is no more air
As in heaven as on earth
We have been dieing since of birth
The streets paved with blood
Pain fills the air
Choking and drowning
Till no more life
Angels come down
Kill us all
From within our sins
Lies a pile of burdens
Cash in our holy lives
For ones impure
Destroyed and smashed
Our lives and our dreams
Start over again
Fresh and clean


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on Apr. 26 2010 at 8:55 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

I read this sucker before. I like the you're gonna die part. love that part. just love it. like the imagery too. "mommy the sky is bleeding ashes".-"thats nice honey".

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on Mar. 5 2010 at 8:09 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

"our lives and our dreams start over again, fresh and clean" my fav!

VERY GOOD! love it

on Feb. 26 2010 at 2:37 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
47 articles 1 photo 133 comments
thanks :) do u have anything posted.?

on Feb. 25 2010 at 3:22 pm
ForbiddenAngel BRONZE, Clewiston, Florida
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WOW THAT WAS AMAZiNG!!! I LOVED THE RYTHM!!!! The imagery !!! U have quite the talent with poetry :D.

on Feb. 22 2010 at 9:16 am
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
47 articles 1 photo 133 comments
thanks a lot :)

lol do u have any poems in the mag yet.?

on Feb. 20 2010 at 2:19 pm
pampalooga PLATINUM, Natick, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"We all can't be heroes. Somebody has to sit on the sides and clap as they go by." "In the end, they're just more words."

...woa. that was so interesting! fantastic idea, too. it had rhythm and a certain flow that made it all that better. grrreat job!


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