noticed had I-

December 29, 2009
noticed had I-
such a discerning light,
of no concern to that which is right-
I quickly a pen reached
and since, began to write-
'tis a lesson twice learned

strive you so to help-him-
alas-of it-what good comes?
dependence now makes he
-the child-
less than he once was-
and you-
sufferer of the Good Cause-
only serve to worsen-
though one of good sight
needs only one to look upon

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Powd3er said...
Feb. 9, 2010 at 2:56 pm
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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abeatlesfan65 replied...
Feb. 9, 2010 at 7:21 pm
Thanks! Though I can't help but notice... is every poem the same to you? I hope I don't offend you, but I think you would sound more sincere if you mixed it up a bit. Just something I noticed, but all the same, I appreciate the comment!
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