Forever Means Never

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You were just there weren't you?
you said you'd never leave, but there you go walking off to who knows where.
when you said forever, i believed you.
when you said never, i believed you. but that all backfired in my face.
we're no more and yeah you left....





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bridge said...
Nov. 25, 2009 at 7:05 pm
very great poem! i understand...
 
boop said...
Nov. 24, 2009 at 9:13 pm
good job. i understand were u comin from.
 
sadmexi said...
Nov. 24, 2009 at 8:53 pm
Girl you put some thought into this thing poem. you have a gift. your not like others who write something that make you feel nothing. this actually made me feel something. i know exactly how you felt when you wrote that. good job nik-nik keep up with your writing dont waste it.
 
darkeyes said...
Nov. 24, 2009 at 8:24 pm
this poem had to come out of experience it looks like this girl has had her heart broken which everyone has at one time or another. girl you have an amazing skill!
 
johnie canava said...
Nov. 24, 2009 at 6:10 pm
this poem is so great
 
txcowgrl291977 said...
Nov. 24, 2009 at 6:07 pm
Wow! This girl is a talented writer to be so young! Great job!
 
polkadot_cowgirl said...
Nov. 24, 2009 at 6:03 pm
This is pretty deep for a kid. Great job!
 
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