I feel Dead

November 6, 2009
By Warren_Uzumaki DIAMOND, Jim Thorpe, Pennsylvania
Warren_Uzumaki DIAMOND, Jim Thorpe, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
they say the mind bends and twists to deal with the horrors of life...
...some times the mind bends so much it snaps in two.

Love at first sight wastes less time


i thought this love would last forever but,
love hates me, it found a way to say never
something inside wants to believe she still cares
something inside wants to heal all the tears
but i don't want to move on, i'll never give up on her
she can still love me, we can work this out, that i know for sure
my heart feels so empty, so completely empty
i never wanted to see her back facing me
i never wanted to see a sad look on her face
i hate being in this painful place
a place known all to well, a place we all call hell
my only wish is to be able to turn back time
so i never had to write this rhyme
even after all the comfort and love i said
your gone and all i feel is dead


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on Nov. 24 2009 at 4:22 pm
riotgirl1134 PLATINUM, Albrightsville, Pennsylvania
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you put to words the hell we all feel when we date such jerks.




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