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I feel Dead

i thought this love would last forever but,
love hates me, it found a way to say never
something inside wants to believe she still cares
something inside wants to heal all the tears
but i don't want to move on, i'll never give up on her
she can still love me, we can work this out, that i know for sure
my heart feels so empty, so completely empty
i never wanted to see her back facing me
i never wanted to see a sad look on her face
i hate being in this painful place
a place known all to well, a place we all call hell
my only wish is to be able to turn back time
so i never had to write this rhyme
even after all the comfort and love i said
your gone and all i feel is dead





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riotgirl1134 said...
Nov. 24, 2009 at 4:22 pm
you put to words the hell we all feel when we date such jerks.
 
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