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I stand around the corner,
What seems to be a life time,
Cute and funny you stand there with friends,
Seeming to shimmer in the light,
Breath, breath, calm down,
Steady my beating heart,
But here he now comes,
Walking straight to the corner at which I stand,
The butterflies soar,
My stomach dances,
My courage is high,
I am ready to speak,
But he keeps passing me by.



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Ali.B said...
Oct. 10, 2009 at 1:52 pm:
thanks i need all the help i can get.
 
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Ali.B said...
Oct. 10, 2009 at 7:16 am:
this is really pretty. i think explains how alot of people feel. i posted some stuuf and when the people send it back you should check it out.
 
TJ21992 replied...
Oct. 10, 2009 at 11:26 am :
THanks and just let me now when they send it back and I will definatly read it
 
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INnaturegirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 10, 2009 at 1:05 am:
... i think every girl could relate to your poem... everyone of us has felt invisible @ some point
 
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qt0518 said...
Oct. 9, 2009 at 10:30 pm:
i love it the ending was awesome....i can relate to this poem
 
TJ21992 replied...
Oct. 10, 2009 at 11:26 am :
Thanks alot, I like being able to relate things with people. It helps us all understand each other better
 
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hannahbee7 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 9, 2009 at 4:51 pm:
This poem just made my day! I love it
 
TJ21992 replied...
Oct. 9, 2009 at 5:13 pm :
Thanks I am glad you like it! Poetry is hard to nail.
 
hannahbee7 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 9, 2009 at 5:21 pm :
I know! But sometimes you just get it right
 
TJ21992 replied...
Oct. 10, 2009 at 11:25 am :
Yes that is so true.
 
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Deverie♥ said...
Oct. 9, 2009 at 10:33 am:
That was amazing. I love the ending. You should honestly keep writing. I will totally read it. :)
 
TJ21992 replied...
Oct. 9, 2009 at 5:14 pm :
Thanks that made my day. I am so wearing a smile. I'm just glad people enjoy my stuff!!!
 
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shakedra<3 said...
Oct. 7, 2009 at 3:04 pm:
WOW..that was really good
check out my poems
 
TJ21992 replied...
Oct. 9, 2009 at 5:17 pm :
I did and there good. Keep writing please you have some great feeling in what you right
 
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