Crush, Crush, My Secret Love

September 28, 2009
By TJ21992 PLATINUM, Penn Yan, New York
TJ21992 PLATINUM, Penn Yan, New York
31 articles 1 photo 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No matter how fast light travels, darkness is always there first, waiting!"


I stand around the corner,
What seems to be a life time,
Cute and funny you stand there with friends,
Seeming to shimmer in the light,
Breath, breath, calm down,
Steady my beating heart,
But here he now comes,
Walking straight to the corner at which I stand,
The butterflies soar,
My stomach dances,
My courage is high,
I am ready to speak,
But he keeps passing me by.



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Ali.B GOLD said...
on Oct. 10 2009 at 1:52 pm
Ali.B GOLD, Lexington, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
I write whatever flows from my fingers- AJY

thanks i need all the help i can get.

on Oct. 10 2009 at 11:26 am
TJ21992 PLATINUM, Penn Yan, New York
31 articles 1 photo 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No matter how fast light travels, darkness is always there first, waiting!"

THanks and just let me now when they send it back and I will definatly read it

on Oct. 10 2009 at 11:26 am
TJ21992 PLATINUM, Penn Yan, New York
31 articles 1 photo 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No matter how fast light travels, darkness is always there first, waiting!"

Thanks alot, I like being able to relate things with people. It helps us all understand each other better

on Oct. 10 2009 at 11:25 am
TJ21992 PLATINUM, Penn Yan, New York
31 articles 1 photo 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No matter how fast light travels, darkness is always there first, waiting!"

Yes that is so true.

Ali.B GOLD said...
on Oct. 10 2009 at 7:16 am
Ali.B GOLD, Lexington, North Carolina
10 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
I write whatever flows from my fingers- AJY

this is really pretty. i think explains how alot of people feel. i posted some stuuf and when the people send it back you should check it out.

on Oct. 10 2009 at 1:05 am
INnaturegirl GOLD, New Albany, Indiana
16 articles 7 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To me frealess doesnt mean living without fears, its not bing completly unfaraid. To me fearless is living inspite of the things that scare you the most." ~Taylor Swift

... i think every girl could relate to your poem... everyone of us has felt invisible @ some point

qt0518 said...
on Oct. 9 2009 at 10:30 pm
i love it the ending was awesome....i can relate to this poem

on Oct. 9 2009 at 5:21 pm
hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
67 articles 1 photo 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You know you’re a writer if your friend tells you a heartbreaking story and your first reaction is – wow, that would make an incredible plot for a novel. You know you’re a smart writer if you manage to keep that reaction to yourself."

I know! But sometimes you just get it right

on Oct. 9 2009 at 5:17 pm
TJ21992 PLATINUM, Penn Yan, New York
31 articles 1 photo 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No matter how fast light travels, darkness is always there first, waiting!"

I did and there good. Keep writing please you have some great feeling in what you right

on Oct. 9 2009 at 5:14 pm
TJ21992 PLATINUM, Penn Yan, New York
31 articles 1 photo 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No matter how fast light travels, darkness is always there first, waiting!"

Thanks that made my day. I am so wearing a smile. I'm just glad people enjoy my stuff!!!

on Oct. 9 2009 at 5:13 pm
TJ21992 PLATINUM, Penn Yan, New York
31 articles 1 photo 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No matter how fast light travels, darkness is always there first, waiting!"

Thanks I am glad you like it! Poetry is hard to nail.

on Oct. 9 2009 at 4:51 pm
hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
67 articles 1 photo 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You know you’re a writer if your friend tells you a heartbreaking story and your first reaction is – wow, that would make an incredible plot for a novel. You know you’re a smart writer if you manage to keep that reaction to yourself."

This poem just made my day! I love it

on Oct. 9 2009 at 10:33 am
That was amazing. I love the ending. You should honestly keep writing. I will totally read it. :)

on Oct. 7 2009 at 3:04 pm
shakedra<3 SILVER, Carrollton, Texas
9 articles 0 photos 14 comments
WOW..that was really good

check out my poems


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