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it came, just like a thunderstorm,
crept in, clouds in all,
and the love flourished all to me, gradually,
.
i first noticed his features,
then his smile, and his laughter,
the clouds, califlower like and beautiful in shape,
they rolled in over the mountains,
.
i didnt notice him till he came into view,
then as the clouds came closer,
so did he,
closer to my heart,
.
then, as time passed,
a thunderstorm hit,
it was amazing,
the lightning struck
his love hit me,
and filled me with joy,
.
then the clouds roared,
the rain came,
and so did the sorrow, and emptiness,
.
but soon the thunderstorm slowly flowed away,
the talks died out,
and the clouds departed,
when it left,
so did his feelings for me.





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Thoughtful-Inker said...
Sept. 10, 2010 at 10:30 pm
This is quite a beautifuly written piece of work. I love the metaphor behind it. This poem is, in my opinion, very well structured. I agree with SarahZ: Please keep writing! I'd love to follow your work.
 
SarahZ said...
Oct. 11, 2009 at 1:14 pm
wow i love thi spoem. i can relate to is 100%. keep writing!
 
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