the Storm of Feelings

September 25, 2009
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it came, just like a thunderstorm,
crept in, clouds in all,
and the love flourished all to me, gradually,
i first noticed his features,
then his smile, and his laughter,
the clouds, califlower like and beautiful in shape,
they rolled in over the mountains,
i didnt notice him till he came into view,
then as the clouds came closer,
so did he,
closer to my heart,
then, as time passed,
a thunderstorm hit,
it was amazing,
the lightning struck
his love hit me,
and filled me with joy,
then the clouds roared,
the rain came,
and so did the sorrow, and emptiness,
but soon the thunderstorm slowly flowed away,
the talks died out,
and the clouds departed,
when it left,
so did his feelings for me.

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Thoughtful-Inker said...
Sept. 10, 2010 at 10:30 pm
This is quite a beautifuly written piece of work. I love the metaphor behind it. This poem is, in my opinion, very well structured. I agree with SarahZ: Please keep writing! I'd love to follow your work.
SarahZ said...
Oct. 11, 2009 at 1:14 pm
wow i love thi spoem. i can relate to is 100%. keep writing!
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