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Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 26 comments

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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on Oct. 1 2010 at 8:57 am
Typiquement BRONZE, Wanneroo, Other
3 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is better to die on your feet than to live on your knees! ~ Emiliano Zapata

Really good, and creative, well done! :)

on Oct. 1 2010 at 8:53 am
soulrebel SILVER, Birmingham, Alabama
5 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't tell me the sky is the limit when i can see footprints on the moon."

THIS IS A GREAT POEM!!!!

 


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on Sep. 30 2010 at 8:45 pm
haleyrl BRONZE, Gladstone, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"When you get to the end of your rope, tie a knot and hang on."

I love this poem! Good job!

on Sep. 30 2010 at 6:39 am
numbheart26 BRONZE, Taytay, Other
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kyaa~! so cute! I could easily relate to every word your poem says. ^^ love it! :)

Mr.Mercer13 said...
on Sep. 27 2010 at 4:00 pm
Mr.Mercer13, Charlotte, North Carolina
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that was a beast poem i mean that came from da heart you know somebody who love dey girlfriend wrote the loving poem

on Sep. 27 2010 at 1:24 pm
NothingButAli GOLD, Silver Lake, Indiana
11 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The best things in life are better left unseen. that's why we close our eyes when we cry, kiss, and dream"- Anonymous

very very good (: keep it up!

on Sep. 23 2010 at 10:17 pm
SuperEeks SILVER, Farmington, Utah
6 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not about how many breaths you take,
it's about how many moment take your breath away.

Wow! You NAILED my current life! I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this!! Every single word is GREAT! Thank you!

on Sep. 23 2010 at 3:40 pm
Grania PLATINUM, Portland, Maine
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This is so true to my life. Beautiful job.

on Sep. 22 2010 at 9:24 pm
Amber72272 SILVER, Bolingbrook, Illinois
8 articles 2 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You Are What You Say You Are You Do What You Say You Can"

i like it...enough said

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on Sep. 21 2010 at 4:39 pm
VictoriaE GOLD, Goodyear, Arizona
18 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I know who I am. I don't need suggestions on who I should be."

I know EXACTLY what that feels like. Great way of putting it. It's awesome.

Phia10 GOLD said...
on Sep. 19 2010 at 9:06 pm
Phia10 GOLD, Seattle, Washington
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This is a really good poem! Great job!

on Sep. 18 2010 at 5:52 pm
Lisbeth_ BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
1 article 1 photo 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My dreams, they've gotta kiss me 'cause i don't get sleep, no."
the gorillaz

"How nice-- to feel nothing, and still get full credit for being alive."
~kurt vonnegut

adore this:D

on Sep. 16 2010 at 4:44 pm
juliadanielle, Fairhope, Alabama
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haha, wow. that took talent. priceless.

Crispy said...
on Sep. 16 2010 at 7:21 am
Crispy, Spotsylvania, Virginia
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I really enjoyed reading this poem because people can relate to this and understand the emotion in the poem.

on Sep. 12 2010 at 9:00 pm
if_i_fall16 SILVER, East Bridgewater, Massachusetts
7 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never Let the Fear of Striking Out Keep You From Playing the Game" - Babe Ruth

I absolutely 100% fell in love with this the second i finished it....it's amazing....

on Sep. 12 2010 at 4:55 pm
REALLY REALLY LOVE THIS!!!!!!! <3 <3

on Sep. 12 2010 at 4:16 pm
ellebelly SILVER, Keller, Texas
7 articles 2 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
yesterday is history tomorrow is a mystery today is a gift that's why its called the present

I LOVE THIS!!!:)

Photo_97 said...
on Sep. 12 2010 at 12:24 pm
Photo_97, Ct., Connecticut
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I REALLY LOVE THIS! And i know just how u feel so it makes it sooo much bettter.

on Sep. 12 2010 at 7:20 am
samchichi BRONZE, Lake Worth, Florida
4 articles 2 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
1)Nobodys perfect, deal wih it
2)I don't care what anyone thinks of me, i'm me and i won't change for anyone!!
3) If you have nothing nice to say, don't say it at all!!!!!!!!!!

i can soo relate to this(:

on Sep. 11 2010 at 7:54 pm
SaMiLoVe97 SILVER, Okawville, Illinois
9 articles 3 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
If it doesnt break your heart it isnt love, if it doesnt break your heart its not enough. Its when youre breaking down with your insides coming out.Thats when you learn what youre made of.-Switchfoot<3

Ohmehgod!! This is excactly how i feel. Very wonderful