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January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

© Colton D., Lubbock, TX

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Emmy13329 GOLD said...
on Sep. 11 2010 at 11:49 am
Emmy13329 GOLD, Middletown, Delaware
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i can't tell u how much i luv this poem it's AMAZING!!! ,like i reallllllllllllly LOVE THIS SO MUCH :)
B2013 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 8 2010 at 7:46 am
B2013 BRONZE, Dayton, Ohio
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I thought this poem was really nice and I loved it !
SamanthaBarwick SILVER said...
on Sep. 7 2010 at 7:07 pm
SamanthaBarwick SILVER, Brunswick, Georgia
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I LOVE THIS! I'm not kidding you, I have printed this out and it's now hanging on my wall :D
Anupama BRONZE said...
on Sep. 2 2010 at 9:46 am
Anupama BRONZE, Mumbai, Other
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Awww. Soo cute :)
shy-writer GOLD said...
on Aug. 31 2010 at 7:53 pm
shy-writer GOLD, Spotsylvania, Virginia
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I LOVE THIS! It is so relatable to alot of people! Including me! It is also a really basic rhyme scheme but has alot of meaning! It's really good! :)
diamondgal29 GOLD said...
on Aug. 29 2010 at 10:04 am
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wow, i rlly like this!
Bee.xx SILVER said...
on Aug. 27 2010 at 7:51 am
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Omg this is great work! This is like how my feelings where for a guy. he was the biggest jerk and i couldnt stop thinking about him for a long time. Keep up the good work!
k!$#@ "Shantel" said...
on Aug. 26 2010 at 12:36 pm
I absolutely love this poem. Great Job!!!
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That's good stuff
B.R.Pollman BRONZE said...
on Aug. 21 2010 at 9:37 pm
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This is a great one. You have alot of talent, and not many peices stick out like this one.  Keep it up.
Allisonmay SILVER said...
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This is.. amazing.

I have loved the Jerk as well..

wellfleetgirl said...
on Aug. 21 2010 at 4:49 pm
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this jerk you love... i have loved him, too.
TaylorMariee GOLD said...
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This is a very unique style of peotry. But it is very good. Keep up the good work.
Puff_the_dragon PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 21 2010 at 11:48 am
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This is amzing
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Well. That was...something....
ShadowOfaGirl GOLD said...
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I love your poem! Many people feel this way and you wrote it down! Great job!
HOPEfully SILVER said...
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adorable!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
loves2write95 said...
on Aug. 21 2010 at 12:08 am
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so good! so true as well.
madilyne BRONZE said...
on Aug. 10 2010 at 11:04 pm
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this really made me cry, i love it
splinterstar BRONZE said...
on Aug. 10 2010 at 7:24 pm
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This poem is such whimsical romantic genius. Sort of like those cute innocent poems we read in elementary, but with a reality twist. Keep writing!!