Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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on Nov. 7 2012 at 8:23 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

I loved this! Great job!

on Nov. 1 2012 at 11:10 am
dotsonboy99 BRONZE, Baton Rouge, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
yolo

i liked the line . i love your cocky smile  

on Oct. 18 2012 at 9:40 am
Sissybug2012 PLATINUM, Union, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"the greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love and be loved in return." -MOULIN ROUGE (song lyrics)

Very good flow. I liked it a lot.

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on Oct. 17 2012 at 10:12 am
MSBCBB, Goose Creek, South Carolina
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The rhyming was unneeded, only a certain amount of words can ryhme. And you're hiding. I don't feel as if this guy is a jerk. This is petty and cliche. The repetition wasn't effective, I felt as if it was kind of redundant.

on Oct. 15 2012 at 11:13 am
NotWriting_Bazinga PLATINUM, Park Rapids, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"She thought in Italics and felt in CAPITALS." Henry James, Jr
"The terrible part is the truth is the only thing you want to hear.... but the last thing you want to admit." Casey Dalton

It is so simple... yet so intense. Totally relateable and sad. i love it.

on Oct. 12 2012 at 7:32 pm
Misfit95 PLATINUM, Dover, Ohio
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Ah, yes. I had a "jerk" of my own before....As a matter of fact, I was engaged to him at one point...But I learned my lesson.  You did a wonderful job with this poem. :)

on Oct. 10 2012 at 2:05 pm
tatertot15 SILVER, West Bend, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"Hate cannot drive out hate; only love can do that."
~Martin Luther King jr.

Just as everyone else is saying, it is very easy to relate. I have a 'jerk' of my own

on Oct. 9 2012 at 12:08 pm
stillhuman SILVER, Lexington, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Stand for whats right even if your standing alone :)

I love this poem because I think that all teenagers can relate. Very well written and the word choice was beautifully exicuted(:

KeidraB said...
on Oct. 1 2012 at 8:33 am
KeidraB, Lorman, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
"Our Deepest Fear"

Awesome.....Wonderful Word Choice!!!

on Sep. 27 2012 at 7:08 am
remember16 SILVER, WhiteLake, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
This is only a minor setback to a major comeback

this is amazing, i can relate to this.... !!!!!

on Sep. 25 2012 at 2:02 pm
1doodlebug0 BRONZE, Pampa, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
As he was valiant I praised him; as he was ambitious I slew him. - William Shakespeare

You just made me cry... that sounds just like my ex-boyfriend who is still in love with me and visa -versa...

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on Sep. 19 2012 at 9:25 am
KayleeG GOLD, Fort Atkinson, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are not who everyone wants you to be"

definatly one of my favorite poems!

on Sep. 17 2012 at 10:37 am
garshongjasmine SILVER, Accra, Other
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Favorite Quote:
happiness resides not in possesions, and not in gold, the feeling of happiness dwells in the soul























-democritus

this is beautiful and well written

on Sep. 16 2012 at 7:16 pm
bloodykittenz GOLD, Calgary, Other
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check out my posts! i really love writing and want feedback! ill read yours if you comment and rate!

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on Sep. 12 2012 at 9:54 am
__katherene, Silver Spring, Maryland
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this is really nice, and cute.

on Sep. 7 2012 at 9:39 pm
Emin3mAC SILVER, Nogalas, Arizona
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This is a VERY well done poem. Good job! 

on Sep. 3 2012 at 7:34 pm
I think that this poem is sweet

on Sep. 2 2012 at 7:02 am
SaraBearxo SILVER, Haddam, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"Love all, trust a few, do wrong to none."
"Life's but a walking shadow, a poor player, that struts and frets his hour upon the stage, and then is heard no more; it is a tale told by an idiot, full of sound and fury, signifying nothing." -Shakespeare

I was in love with a jerk and this made my cry reading it:') you're a beautiful writer. 

Aleboo said...
on Aug. 26 2012 at 3:53 am
This was just perfect. Great job!

on Aug. 20 2012 at 8:17 pm
Mimi15 PLATINUM, Belfast, Maine
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I am also completely head over heals for this jerky guy. You're a fantastic writer by the way. If you don't mind, I'd love to hear your opinion of my poem Broken Structure. Cheers. :)


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