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Jerk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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jazzyy33456 said...
Apr. 23, 2012 at 9:15 am:
i like it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!<3
 
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CodyKinzz This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 22, 2012 at 5:29 pm:
This is stunning
 
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Nisha007 said...
Apr. 18, 2012 at 3:22 pm:
I really like this poem I has great stanzas and meaning. ROCK ON!!!!!!!
 
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BlueLillyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 17, 2012 at 11:06 am:
I love this its AWSOME!! Wish I could write as good as you. You got real talent girl KEEP WRITING!
 
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TheMouseWins said...
Apr. 16, 2012 at 5:12 pm:
I adore this. I like how the narrator is so wrapped up in this person, and yet she says he's a jerk all the same (I can relate...)
 
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Mimi15 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 14, 2012 at 3:12 pm:
Wow! This is really great. Sorry for the advertising, but do you mind checking out some of my newer work? Keep writing :)
 
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GothicNightmare said...
Apr. 13, 2012 at 4:02 pm:
Flows very well in each stanza!
 
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CreativeAngel said...
Apr. 9, 2012 at 6:25 pm:

Very true sometimes with relationships. You can't get out of it even though its bad. Loved the poem and it had a nice pattern to it.

 

 
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Madelyn H. said...
Apr. 8, 2012 at 8:45 am:
Wonderful poem, it flowed very well.
 
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JesusFreak10101 said...
Apr. 6, 2012 at 2:44 pm:
Ugh! I hate it when i like a guy thats sort of a jerk to me! Cute peom though! :) Keep up the good work!
 
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ForeverChaney said...
Apr. 3, 2012 at 11:24 am:
its a guyish poem...HAHAHAHAHA...:0
 
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Sky2Lorena said...
Mar. 28, 2012 at 3:34 pm:
hahaha. i love this peom it reminds me of my jerk. i never though i could find a poem that could fit the one i love.
 
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writer3499 said...
Mar. 27, 2012 at 3:01 pm:
This was so good! I love it.
 
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ImJustAGuy said...
Mar. 23, 2012 at 12:01 pm:
I love this, it's hard to explain my feelings for this in words (: please check out some of my writing ! I'm a new and upcoming pet !
 
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Meghan D. said...
Mar. 19, 2012 at 6:03 pm:
Amazing! Just great! Really captures what the real life is when it comes to guys.
 
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HappyEverAfter said...
Mar. 18, 2012 at 11:08 pm:
I love this! The best part of this poem, at least to me, is the first four lines. I love them! 
 
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LalalLULUL said...
Mar. 16, 2012 at 12:23 pm:
OMG THIS IS TOOO TRUE
 
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ClaudeTheDemonButler said...
Mar. 15, 2012 at 6:12 pm:
this is an increadible poem
 
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escape-the-insanity This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 15, 2012 at 11:29 am:
OMG i love this so much. the fact that i actually just said OMG proves that lol. i don't have to tell you how good it is bc you already have many comments doing that. but this fits a situation i'm in right now to a T.
 
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dramagurl13 said...
Mar. 15, 2012 at 9:59 am:
My guy drives me nuts, but he isn't a jerk. He is super nice- but great poem anyway!
 
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