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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.





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writer3499 said...
Mar. 27, 2012 at 3:01 pm:
This was so good! I love it.
 
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ImJustAGuy said...
Mar. 23, 2012 at 12:01 pm:
I love this, it's hard to explain my feelings for this in words (: please check out some of my writing ! I'm a new and upcoming pet !
 
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Meghan D. This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 19, 2012 at 6:03 pm:
Amazing! Just great! Really captures what the real life is when it comes to guys.
 
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HappyEverAfter said...
Mar. 18, 2012 at 11:08 pm:
I love this! The best part of this poem, at least to me, is the first four lines. I love them! 
 
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LalalLULUL said...
Mar. 16, 2012 at 12:23 pm:
OMG THIS IS TOOO TRUE
 
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ClaudeTheDemonButler said...
Mar. 15, 2012 at 6:12 pm:
this is an increadible poem
 
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escape-the-insanityThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 15, 2012 at 11:29 am:
OMG i love this so much. the fact that i actually just said OMG proves that lol. i don't have to tell you how good it is bc you already have many comments doing that. but this fits a situation i'm in right now to a T.
 
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dramagurl13 said...
Mar. 15, 2012 at 9:59 am:
My guy drives me nuts, but he isn't a jerk. He is super nice- but great poem anyway!
 
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ThatMegan said...
Mar. 13, 2012 at 7:49 pm:
Wow, this is amazing! Great job with emotion and detail! I can totally relate and thought of a situation of mine the whole time! Great job grabing and holding the readers attention! Nicely done, keep writing I would love to read more! You've got talent!
 
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MiaUnwriten said...
Mar. 10, 2012 at 2:56 pm:
Cool, it reminds me of my special jerk
 
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Megan_LizFan said...
Mar. 2, 2012 at 8:22 pm:
This is really good! I can really relate to this! Keep up the good work :)
 
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gitfiddleluv13 said...
Feb. 22, 2012 at 6:04 pm:
I really love and understand this poem...I can really relate to it. Great job!!
 
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MarleyRainbow said...
Feb. 22, 2012 at 3:06 pm:
you love a jerk?? why
 
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Ahhoy2 said...
Feb. 22, 2012 at 1:14 pm:
I can understand it, though I was once that jerk.
 
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MMortonThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 22, 2012 at 8:09 am:
I relate. I see your point and I can totally get jerks.
 
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albealer said...
Feb. 19, 2012 at 9:08 pm:
omg i love this. its awesome and i can totally relate.
 
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FK92495 said...
Feb. 17, 2012 at 11:57 am:
wow i can so relate to this story and am sure most of the girls on earth do. great job!
 
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NonexistentRemedies said...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 9:45 am:
I love how this poem can relate to 99% of the girl population. There's so many guys out there that are jerks and so many girls fall for them.
 
Michaela M. This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 9, 2012 at 6:33 pm :
amazing poem ... just great i love reading it from time to time
 
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ForeverFlirty22 said...
Feb. 5, 2012 at 1:17 pm:
I love it! So true! It says what so many of us think. Just great!!
 
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