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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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Brittany=)This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 9, 2009 at 1:08 pm
this is really good, and I can relate.
 
Jaylahni P. said...
May 8, 2009 at 10:40 pm
i can't really relate to ur poembut i think it's really gud and that 2 me it seems like u have a natural talent for writing poems. i think u should continue 2 write many many more poems!!!
 
sammyd210 said...
May 8, 2009 at 7:39 pm
like the poem keep up the work.....
 
chrissy123 said...
May 4, 2009 at 4:08 pm
wow i can really relate to this...one of my sort/of boyfriends was like this...a tortured love. I really feel that you expressed how I feel about him and it's good to know I'm not the only one with a jerk bf.
 
AllEY_NAt said...
Apr. 29, 2009 at 7:01 pm
this is a good poem i love my JERKY COCKY boyfriend
 
chelchelbear said...
Apr. 29, 2009 at 5:05 pm
i like how you were able to use word that ryme and still have alot of meaning... keep it up love this poem!
 
lyssabby said...
Apr. 29, 2009 at 2:08 am
i lovee this poem;; its such a great poem . :)
propss to this authorr .
great poem :)
 
Meeka said...
Apr. 28, 2009 at 10:30 pm
Exactly how I feel; I love it :D
 
Kumang said...
Apr. 27, 2009 at 9:04 am
uh its good.. lol
 
Marina L. said...
Apr. 26, 2009 at 8:51 pm
Yeah i felt the same way and i still loved him for it the best jerk...lol loved the poem thanks
 
gbautista95 said...
Apr. 26, 2009 at 12:28 am
this poem deff. rocks i lubb it and i tink da same 2
 
hope.floats said...
Apr. 25, 2009 at 3:53 am
I dated the jerk - trust me - he's not worth it. There is someone out there that will love everything about you too.
 
vamppoet16 said...
Apr. 23, 2009 at 12:55 am
You are amazing with words. I know exactly how that feels and i could never have come close. I give it a 10...
 
nxexnxaxj said...
Apr. 22, 2009 at 8:30 pm
wow
dis is amazin
i can def. relate
 
Lindda sunshine said...
Apr. 22, 2009 at 5:38 pm
I really really LOVE this poem! it reminds me so much of my very own jerk.. i mean eww.. such a jerk.
 
Sarah T. said...
Apr. 21, 2009 at 7:53 pm
Yes, I like this poem as well!
I can some what relate,
my situation is a bit different though! Haha
But, Yeah Girl, Keep it up!
 
Rebecca P. said...
Apr. 20, 2009 at 1:38 am
Ilove your poem and it hlped me understand a hard time I was going through with a guy at my just like you described in the poem im a poetry writer myslf and a hard critic but all i have to say about this poem INCREDIBLE!!!!!! LUV IT B)
 
Mikaela P. said...
Apr. 18, 2009 at 9:30 pm
Wow that was so amazing I know a lot of guys like that too
 
Harmony B. said...
Apr. 18, 2009 at 4:20 pm
That is an really GREAT poem!!!
 
Lili said...
Apr. 14, 2009 at 10:24 pm
This is a cute honest poem i really LOVE it keep it up
 
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