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Jerk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.





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Kumang said...
Apr. 27, 2009 at 9:04 am:
uh its good.. lol
 
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Marina L. said...
Apr. 26, 2009 at 8:51 pm:
Yeah i felt the same way and i still loved him for it the best jerk...lol loved the poem thanks
 
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gbautista95 said...
Apr. 26, 2009 at 12:28 am:
this poem deff. rocks i lubb it and i tink da same 2
 
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hope.floats said...
Apr. 25, 2009 at 3:53 am:
I dated the jerk - trust me - he's not worth it. There is someone out there that will love everything about you too.
 
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vamppoet16 said...
Apr. 23, 2009 at 12:55 am:
You are amazing with words. I know exactly how that feels and i could never have come close. I give it a 10...
 
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nxexnxaxj said...
Apr. 22, 2009 at 8:30 pm:
wow
dis is amazin
i can def. relate
 
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Lindda sunshine said...
Apr. 22, 2009 at 5:38 pm:
I really really LOVE this poem! it reminds me so much of my very own jerk.. i mean eww.. such a jerk.
 
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Sarah T. said...
Apr. 21, 2009 at 7:53 pm:
Yes, I like this poem as well!
I can some what relate,
my situation is a bit different though! Haha
But, Yeah Girl, Keep it up!
 
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Rebecca P. said...
Apr. 20, 2009 at 1:38 am:
Ilove your poem and it hlped me understand a hard time I was going through with a guy at my just like you described in the poem im a poetry writer myslf and a hard critic but all i have to say about this poem INCREDIBLE!!!!!! LUV IT B)
 
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Mikaela P. said...
Apr. 18, 2009 at 9:30 pm:
Wow that was so amazing I know a lot of guys like that too
 
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Harmony B. said...
Apr. 18, 2009 at 4:20 pm:
That is an really GREAT poem!!!
 
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Lili said...
Apr. 14, 2009 at 10:24 pm:
This is a cute honest poem i really LOVE it keep it up
 
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tbbf09 said...
Apr. 14, 2009 at 1:02 pm:
ha ha very very good you are a writer to be this sounds like my ex boyfriend but oh the things us girls can get attached too.
 
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SarahNearol said...
Apr. 11, 2009 at 11:01 pm:
You have quite a knack for rhyming. Good job. I love rhyming poems, they are my favorite type and this one just captured my attention immediately. You're terrific!
 
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meredith P. said...
Apr. 11, 2009 at 10:21 pm:
ur writing is amazing!!!keep it up!!!
 
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Mellanie P. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 11, 2009 at 9:50 pm:
jaja great poem.! really straightforward. :).
 
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sasuke468 said...
Apr. 11, 2009 at 7:44 pm:
i can totally relate love it
 
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dot.! said...
Apr. 11, 2009 at 2:31 pm:
i looooooove it! i can totally relate! its amazing! can you please tell me what you think of my work too??
its TeenInk.com/raw/Poetry/article/91361/Trapped
thanks! and again urs was a relllly good poem!! seriously!
 
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cry_wolf said...
Apr. 10, 2009 at 11:53 pm:
I read this in the magazine and it was an insta-fav. ;] It's just so cool to finally find a community of people who share in my interests. Good job!!
 
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candy said...
Apr. 8, 2009 at 5:39 pm:
very good poem so great!!!!!! and awesome so cool
 
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