Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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on Oct. 17 2009 at 1:55 pm
SassyBeauty BRONZE, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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omgg!

i didnt know how to put the way I felt about my ex but now I do! iLoveit!

on Oct. 17 2009 at 11:58 am
♫My_Shooting_Star♫ BRONZE, Walla Walla, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
whoever said anything was possible obviously never tried slamming a revolving door.

this is great

on Oct. 17 2009 at 3:52 am
Only,I PLATINUM, Taylorville, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
This too shall pass.

This is exactly how i feel torwards my ex, this is amazing, its everything I want to say but cant you know, its way good, keep it up:)

on Oct. 11 2009 at 9:31 pm
meaghan demallie SILVER, Jamison, Pennsylvania
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and although hes a jerk, you can't stop loving him, can't stop having feelings for him. You want to slap him, to kick him, to key his car, you want him to say baby, i love you

story of my life.

we all want what we can't have

i know this feeling, and im pretty sure so does everyone else...

i want him.

Great poem! really relatable!

halls SILVER said...
on Oct. 4 2009 at 4:06 pm
halls SILVER, Harrison City, Pennsylvania
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omg i love this poem it is so amazing

on Oct. 2 2009 at 11:24 pm
Mylifeforpoetry BRONZE, Burlingame, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Learning how to fly is jumping and missing the ground"

OMG, this describes my crush exactly!

on Oct. 1 2009 at 8:33 am
NASHAYLA:) GOLD, Springfield, Ohio
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THiS iS REALLY q00D:)

on Sep. 25 2009 at 8:18 pm
rain-rain111 PLATINUM, Roselle, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
He offered her the world but she said she had her own.

This was great!!! when it was printed in the magazine and I first read this I understood what you ment thats a sign of an amzing poem! Keep up the writing.

on Sep. 25 2009 at 7:37 pm
wow, so good so true about guys that are jerks, but yet they aren't jerks. I can totally relate to this poem

on Sep. 25 2009 at 5:21 pm
sarahxinsane921 SILVER, St. Charles, Missouri
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This Is An Ahmazing Piece Of Work, And A Wonderful Display Of Emotion.

Keep Writing :)

doverdrama said...
on Sep. 25 2009 at 4:11 pm
i love this so ,much! this perfectly describes howi feel about a guy! i hope you keep writing, youre really good!

on Sep. 25 2009 at 3:57 pm
AubreyTRieder PLATINUM, Clark, New Jersey
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omg i love this! i think the poem is great, the rhythm the rhyming.... love it! and good job getting it published!!! u have real talent!

check out my stuff and comment so i can improve, too!

Akila_M. GOLD said...
on Sep. 25 2009 at 3:42 pm
Akila_M. GOLD, Greensboro, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Dancing is the soul having happy convulsions." - Akila

This basically describes somebody in my life this past summer. It's neat how you could gather all those thoughts into such a small space. I like it!

on Sep. 25 2009 at 3:03 pm
beautifulpeople SILVER, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Do what you want to do but be ready for the consequences."

ohmyygolly! that describes this one guy that sits in front of mee in science!!! except he has dirtyy blond hair and he doesn't really notice mee! haha but hunn youu have an AMAZINGG poem:) most girls will fall in love with this

on Sep. 25 2009 at 2:11 pm
OMG i love it it just really describes my life right now and i really hope ur going to keep up the reat work. its really cool to know that there are other people going through the same things as u even though that a not good things most of the time.

liz1800 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 25 2009 at 12:34 pm
liz1800 BRONZE, Carrollton, Texas
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i LIKE THIS POEM:)

on Sep. 25 2009 at 12:07 pm
MissyxJoker SILVER, Rochester, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Today you are You, that is truer than true. There is no one alive who is Youer than You."
-Dr. Seuss

I love this poem cause it's so true! There's always that one guy that you end up having the bigest crush on. When you know you shouldn't, cause he's a jerk but you just can't help it...

Black Heart said...
on Sep. 25 2009 at 10:38 am
I totally agree. THis was just... undescribavle*wink*

on Sep. 25 2009 at 10:23 am
dylonmichael GOLD, El Dorado, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
i have two one is "live life as if it were your last day on earth" and two is "never make some one your everything because when they leave you you have nothing"

i love it i fell in love with a jerk a huge one

Amber1994 GOLD said...
on Sep. 25 2009 at 9:43 am
Amber1994 GOLD, Roanoke, Illinois
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awsome poem!!

-please check out my poems and comment-


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