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Jerk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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Liv_Drummer said...
Feb. 19, 2011 at 7:51 pm
cool beans cheeka :D two thumbs up!
 
SpiderMilk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 19, 2011 at 1:01 pm
Wow, this is excellent! (:
 
searbear180 said...
Feb. 17, 2011 at 8:49 pm
Wow.  This is a fantastic poem!! Great work! keep it up!!!
 
kelsey2097 said...
Feb. 17, 2011 at 9:22 am
they dont no what they got and love till they lose it
 
Sarah-class2011 said...
Feb. 16, 2011 at 7:55 pm

Wow. Awesome. This is so spot onto a situation I was in a few months back. Good work.

 

Believe me, you'll be better off with out him. Trust me.

 
VATSVD said...
Feb. 16, 2011 at 5:28 pm
I LOVE IT!! Your amazing poem just inspired me to write one! And its so true I can relate so much! Love the Poem!! ^.^
 
The_Delusional_Philosopher said...
Feb. 16, 2011 at 7:31 am
Mmmmmmmmm ;)
 
3moBunnie said...
Feb. 14, 2011 at 10:22 am
oh wow im sorry that happend to you...you will get through it though and youll find someone better...trust me(:
 
ashleyn said...
Feb. 13, 2011 at 4:59 pm
I love it! Heck yes this is true...you know what you're talking about... (:
 
MKimmi said...
Feb. 13, 2011 at 1:15 pm
I LOVE IT!!!! SO TRUE AND IT FLOWS!!!♥
 
ashyshadow replied...
Mar. 22, 2011 at 5:04 pm

i remembr reading this in one of the issues

 i love it =)

 
yasmina.tabbal said...
Feb. 13, 2011 at 12:32 pm
It's Valentines Day and here I am crying about the jerk who broke my heart.
 
Mahimaangelin said...
Feb. 13, 2011 at 8:40 am

wow, I really love this poem!

Good work! Keep it up buddy!

 
angehuertas27 said...
Feb. 11, 2011 at 4:27 pm
wow. great poem. its funny because that actually is applying to my life right now! But anyways really good job i love it!
 
danibean11 said...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 2:50 pm
This is great. The best guys are jerks. : )
 
WillowFalls This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 8:13 am
Great poem! :)
 
youwish said...
Feb. 9, 2011 at 8:42 pm
i love this but in my world hes only a jerk because i love him.
 
yasmina.tabbal replied...
Feb. 13, 2011 at 12:31 pm
Isn't that always the case? :S Boys suck.
 
cristibabygirl said...
Feb. 9, 2011 at 11:14 am
this is amazin , i can relate to this because of my ex and how i still love him and how he is so good to me but someone lied to him about me and for that , he is a jerk . a jerk i love
 
PieIsAwkward said...
Feb. 8, 2011 at 1:31 pm

This is really good!

It reminds me of a Roleplay I do with my friend, I have a character, Lavi, who's of course a total jerk, and my friend's character, ayam, falls in love with him despite it.

This so sounds like something a lot of girls can relate to, and I absolutely love it, it's spectacular.

 
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