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Jerk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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MKimmi said...
Feb. 13, 2011 at 1:15 pm
I LOVE IT!!!! SO TRUE AND IT FLOWS!!!♥
 
ashyshadow replied...
Mar. 22, 2011 at 5:04 pm

i remembr reading this in one of the issues

 i love it =)

 
yasmina.tabbal said...
Feb. 13, 2011 at 12:32 pm
It's Valentines Day and here I am crying about the jerk who broke my heart.
 
Mahimaangelin said...
Feb. 13, 2011 at 8:40 am

wow, I really love this poem!

Good work! Keep it up buddy!

 
angehuertas27 said...
Feb. 11, 2011 at 4:27 pm
wow. great poem. its funny because that actually is applying to my life right now! But anyways really good job i love it!
 
danibean11 said...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 2:50 pm
This is great. The best guys are jerks. : )
 
WillowFalls This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 8:13 am
Great poem! :)
 
youwish said...
Feb. 9, 2011 at 8:42 pm
i love this but in my world hes only a jerk because i love him.
 
yasmina.tabbal replied...
Feb. 13, 2011 at 12:31 pm
Isn't that always the case? :S Boys suck.
 
cristibabygirl said...
Feb. 9, 2011 at 11:14 am
this is amazin , i can relate to this because of my ex and how i still love him and how he is so good to me but someone lied to him about me and for that , he is a jerk . a jerk i love
 
PieIsAwkward said...
Feb. 8, 2011 at 1:31 pm

This is really good!

It reminds me of a Roleplay I do with my friend, I have a character, Lavi, who's of course a total jerk, and my friend's character, ayam, falls in love with him despite it.

This so sounds like something a lot of girls can relate to, and I absolutely love it, it's spectacular.

 
ski_mayday said...
Feb. 7, 2011 at 5:16 pm
This is a wonderful poem. Many people can relate to this, and that's part of what makes it so great. Keep writing :).
 
roadrunnerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 6, 2011 at 4:41 pm
love this poem. <3
 
clairbair14 said...
Feb. 6, 2011 at 12:58 pm
ugh i also am attracted to jerks too! and judging by allt he comments lots of girls are!
 
Maracuja said...
Feb. 4, 2011 at 8:38 pm
Too true for words ... except these :)
 
miracle said...
Feb. 3, 2011 at 12:25 pm
i realy like dis poem a lot is so good is wonderful
 
TayIndago said...
Feb. 1, 2011 at 8:55 pm
wow this poem was absolutly amazing...I can COMPLELTY relate to this, and it just reminded me of the jerk that I used to be with. Nice poem! keep up the good work!
 
missamanda said...
Jan. 30, 2011 at 1:23 am
This was amazing. I can really feel what you are going for. Who doesn't love a good jerk?
 
frenchfry said...
Jan. 29, 2011 at 10:29 pm
I can realate to this so well
 
kayla615 said...
Jan. 29, 2011 at 4:23 pm
soo real! i can relate to this in many ways
 
krazykelsey said...
Jan. 28, 2011 at 5:16 pm

wow iv been there too many times with the same guy

 

 
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