Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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on Apr. 9 2011 at 9:30 am
RideTheWave BRONZE, South Riding, Virginia
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This was great!!!!! don't criticize! i think it was amazing!!!!!!! Keep up the good work! this could be a song!!!!! 

Maddy_D SILVER said...
on Apr. 8 2011 at 3:29 pm
Maddy_D SILVER, New Tripoli, Pennsylvania
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oh and if u dont want to hear about people talking about thier problems, love life, or themselves then dont read poems like this.... 

Common Sence here


Maddy_D SILVER said...
on Apr. 8 2011 at 3:26 pm
Maddy_D SILVER, New Tripoli, Pennsylvania
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puke? wow okay because im sure you can do sooo much better. this poem is amazing and so relatable to my life, and all the jerks in it :) 

(THE OPPOSITE OF PUKE;) )


on Apr. 8 2011 at 1:06 pm
Haljus2121 SILVER, Parma, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Never Wait for Holidays to give to others"

Read the poetry that I just posted today. They still have to approve it but I think you will really enjoy. God-Bless

on Apr. 7 2011 at 4:27 pm
AdultSwim PLATINUM, Chicago Ridge, Illinois
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Will someone please write a poem that isn't about themselves, their own problems or their love life?

Puke.


ScottieMeuse said...
on Apr. 6 2011 at 12:15 pm
ScottieMeuse, Saugus, Massachusetts
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i really liked this poem. i liked your use of rhyming. also, your picture is very interesting. ive never seen anyone mix UnderArmour with a cowboy hat.

on Apr. 5 2011 at 12:46 pm
WaterGirl23 BRONZE, Nutley, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Some are born great, some achieve greatness, and some have greatness thrust upon them." -William Shakespeare

love it! :D jerks are good inspiration for writing hahaha

on Apr. 4 2011 at 6:06 pm
jaymishae SILVER, Jonesboro, Arkansas
6 articles 1 photo 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Two things are infinite: the universe and human stupidity; and I'm not sure about the universe." - Albert Einstein

I love this poem. Actually, it reminds me of a conversation I had at school today.... Anyway, excellent choice of words. 

on Apr. 4 2011 at 11:50 am
Anasunny SILVER, Florissant, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Ours is not to reason why, ours is but to do or die.
~ Charge of the Light Brigade, Alfred Lord Tennyson

Cute poem! Haha "you precious jerk"

on Apr. 1 2011 at 4:41 pm
BlackKittie SILVER, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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haha this is so cute :P

sassy3006 said...
on Mar. 31 2011 at 4:59 pm
this reminds me of somone

normgrl GOLD said...
on Mar. 31 2011 at 9:11 am
normgrl GOLD, Jacksonville, Florida
13 articles 11 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do we eat to live or live to eat?

Ooo...makes me think about the fact that sometimes, no matter how stupid they are, we still love 'em.

Really cute <3 And I love the last two lines.


Rockin_Rica said...
on Mar. 31 2011 at 7:54 am
Rockin_Rica, Taylor, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
is yhu mad

omg this poem is so cute i love it!

shay10 said...
on Mar. 31 2011 at 7:53 am
shay10, Taylor Michigan, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
ihsz yhu mad.?

omq i freakinnqq love this poem i feel the same exact way.!

on Mar. 30 2011 at 9:37 pm
buggzbunnie BRONZE, Middle River, Maryland
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i love it and the rythm only makes it so much better even though its alredy great .

RoxyO BRONZE said...
on Mar. 30 2011 at 3:36 pm
RoxyO BRONZE, Santa Fe, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
Lifes too short enjoy as much as you can...

I really like this poem it kinda makes me think about my realitionship lol

whatever25 said...
on Mar. 30 2011 at 7:52 am
I dont get it

smith said...
on Mar. 29 2011 at 10:10 pm
wow! this is beautiful, good writing

on Mar. 29 2011 at 8:08 pm
Mz.Minny2011 SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
My fav quote (4now)
When I met you my heart skipped a beat..... the sun became the moon & cold became heat.... Roses weren't red an violetes weren't blue.....And all because i fell IN LIKE WITH YOU <3

THIS POEM IZ VERY KOOL. LUV IT

on Mar. 29 2011 at 8:01 pm
BarefootInTheWoods SILVER, New Salisbury, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Demon Pox!" ~Will Herondale

Amen! I'm totally in love with a jerk.


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