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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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Bookworm7 said...
Mar. 7, 2011 at 5:32 pm:
This is exactly my predicament. Please keep writinf. This was really great.
 
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AlyssandriaFlamel said...
Mar. 7, 2011 at 4:15 pm:
Right down to the brown hair and amazing eyes. :P Wonderful, and the best description of love that there really is. Not the happiness, but the pain.
 
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bigdreamsbigheart said...
Mar. 7, 2011 at 1:03 pm:

Wow! Very good. I am impressed. It's hard to find a good love poem. And this is definatly it.

It totally describes some guys! STUPID. huh lol.

Read mine, and give feedback. thanks :)

 
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daniec said...
Mar. 7, 2011 at 11:09 am:
OMG i love this poem im living that right now even though he isnt a brunette.And its in the same catagory as my poem Why i cry read and post a comment. Please
 
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Ddog said...
Mar. 6, 2011 at 12:07 pm:
I like this poem. This reminds me of a friend I have who is atracted to a jerk. Are we call atracted to stupid guys!? Any way, good job:)
 
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Jakson5Freak said...
Mar. 3, 2011 at 6:32 pm:
its a great poem. really great.
 
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Get $ said...
Mar. 3, 2011 at 4:43 pm:
That poem reminds me of my X girl haha pretty kewl!!!
 
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weberlin said...
Mar. 1, 2011 at 3:11 pm:
i absolutely love this poem it reminds me of a guy i know but hes not exactly a brunette...
 
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singingwriter14 said...
Feb. 25, 2011 at 6:59 pm:
This is really cute, and so true. 
 
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tonip2 said...
Feb. 25, 2011 at 9:47 am:
I love the rhyme scheme of this poem and how you keep up with the rythm. Thanks for writing!
 
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amhotopp said...
Feb. 25, 2011 at 9:38 am:
I love this poem! I relate to you so much!
 
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mwaldrop said...
Feb. 25, 2011 at 8:23 am:
I love how you wrote this poem for the majority of teenage girls to relate. Why is it that we are all attracted to jerks??
 
PR3tty GiRl SWAG!(: replied...
Mar. 7, 2011 at 8:59 am :
You arent all jerks! girls can be stupid too!(: reallyy, its easier for guys than girls! girls get a bad rep for just kissing someone sometimes.. guys can sleep around and still be popular and not called names other than a "player" which is no big deal!(: so dont think that!! girls just get annoyed easier than guys cus we get judged too hard! and most guys come off to be jerks because of this.
 
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abbymac said...
Feb. 25, 2011 at 7:52 am:
I really like this poem. It's so true and you've captured how most teenage guys are, jerks. Keep writing!
 
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Natali said...
Feb. 24, 2011 at 7:11 pm:
this is a really pretty poem!! keep writing more!!! :)
 
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disasterdominant13 said...
Feb. 24, 2011 at 8:29 am:
i do believe you've captured the essence of teen love in this poem. amazing.
 
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Sportygirl4248This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 23, 2011 at 8:56 pm:
This is sooooo extraordinarilly true! I'm sure a lot of girls can relate to this! You know what to write about:) Keep going! I think it's the best I've ever heard!!
 
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cheyenne1997 said...
Feb. 23, 2011 at 5:46 pm:
best poem ive ever heard....i mean it
 
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vampier said...
Feb. 23, 2011 at 2:52 pm:
wow that is deep if you know what i mean
 
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Sean K. said...
Feb. 23, 2011 at 12:00 pm:
I truly enjoyed this poem.  Your choice of rhyme is amazing.  This was one of the best poems that i have ever read
 
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