Jerk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

January 2, 2009
I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.

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Madison D. said...
Apr. 8, 2011 at 3:26 pm

puke? wow okay because im sure you can do sooo much better. this poem is amazing and so relatable to my life, and all the jerks in it :) 


lovebeatles18 replied...
Apr. 12, 2011 at 10:28 am
well i know for a fact that most poems people write relate to their own problems. and those poems are the best
AdultSwim said...
Apr. 7, 2011 at 4:27 pm

Will someone please write a poem that isn't about themselves, their own problems or their love life?


Haljus2121 replied...
Apr. 8, 2011 at 1:06 pm
Read the poetry that I just posted today. They still have to approve it but I think you will really enjoy. God-Bless replied...
Apr. 14, 2011 at 7:55 pm
uhm the best poems come from expiernece and our own life, you dont have to read it ya know.
ScottieMeuse said...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 12:15 pm
i really liked this poem. i liked your use of rhyming. also, your picture is very interesting. ive never seen anyone mix UnderArmour with a cowboy hat.
WaterGirl23 said...
Apr. 5, 2011 at 12:46 pm
love it! :D jerks are good inspiration for writing hahaha
jaymishae said...
Apr. 4, 2011 at 6:06 pm
I love this poem. Actually, it reminds me of a conversation I had at school today.... Anyway, excellent choice of words. 
Anasunny said...
Apr. 4, 2011 at 11:50 am
Cute poem! Haha "you precious jerk"
BlackKittie said...
Apr. 1, 2011 at 4:41 pm
haha this is so cute :P
sassy3006 said...
Mar. 31, 2011 at 4:59 pm
this reminds me of somone
normgrl said...
Mar. 31, 2011 at 9:11 am

Ooo...makes me think about the fact that sometimes, no matter how stupid they are, we still love 'em.

Really cute <3 And I love the last two lines.

Nichole E. said...
Mar. 31, 2011 at 7:54 am
omg this poem is so cute i love it!
shay10 said...
Mar. 31, 2011 at 7:53 am
omq i freakinnqq love this poem i feel the same exact way.!
buggzbunnie said...
Mar. 30, 2011 at 9:37 pm
i love it and the rythm only makes it so much better even though its alredy great .
RoxyO said...
Mar. 30, 2011 at 3:36 pm
I really like this poem it kinda makes me think about my realitionship lol
whatever25 said...
Mar. 30, 2011 at 7:52 am
I dont get it
smith said...
Mar. 29, 2011 at 10:10 pm
wow! this is beautiful, good writing
Mz.Minny2011 said...
Mar. 29, 2011 at 8:08 pm
midnitewanderer said...
Mar. 29, 2011 at 7:43 pm
Wow this poem speaks the TRUTH!! love the last stanza! "a yet you're the best jerk i see" =) Also the flowing is good. GReat Poem!
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