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Jerk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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asiapooh110 said...
Mar. 21, 2011 at 9:45 am

omg disz poem isz like i love it and it makes seens

 

 
GangstaEyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 20, 2011 at 6:03 pm
Wow. This is great! I'm sure its gotten to the point where you can't even keep up with all the comments! :P I hope one of my poems can reach this level where the audience is in the thousands! Great work :)
 
tinabeana24 said...
Mar. 15, 2011 at 7:17 pm
OMG i love this poem i can SOOOO relate to it!! Good Job i also love how like the reader can feel/get wat ur saying keep up the good work!! (:
 
thecrystalbudz replied...
Mar. 17, 2011 at 11:12 pm
i love it!
 
Yasminno_O said...
Mar. 15, 2011 at 6:01 pm
these is really good, I love how you discribe the feelings
 
TheGoodTwin replied...
Mar. 19, 2011 at 10:07 pm
Buy a dictionary, Yasminno_O, and read it please. 
 
decayingorganicmatter replied...
Mar. 22, 2011 at 8:32 pm
She spelled two words wrong, go away.
 
Nerd34 said...
Mar. 14, 2011 at 8:07 pm
Loved it!!!
 
l.iney said...
Mar. 11, 2011 at 2:36 pm

This is really good and I can sense the feeling in it.

ps check out some of my stuff please :)

 
colas said...
Mar. 10, 2011 at 5:30 pm
wow so true i fall for these gays all the time
 
WritingJulia This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 8, 2011 at 6:29 pm
I love it!!  How long ago did u compose it? 
 
jellyboo said...
Mar. 8, 2011 at 1:40 pm
you are a good writer and i hope that you get a cute boy even if he is a jerk.
 
Maximum said...
Mar. 7, 2011 at 7:29 pm
It's funny-for lack of better word-how often the above happens! Sad, but true!
 
ambermoore said...
Mar. 7, 2011 at 6:50 pm
This is really good
 
Bookworm7 said...
Mar. 7, 2011 at 5:32 pm
This is exactly my predicament. Please keep writinf. This was really great.
 
AlyssandriaFlamel said...
Mar. 7, 2011 at 4:15 pm
Right down to the brown hair and amazing eyes. :P Wonderful, and the best description of love that there really is. Not the happiness, but the pain.
 
bigdreamsbigheart said...
Mar. 7, 2011 at 1:03 pm

Wow! Very good. I am impressed. It's hard to find a good love poem. And this is definatly it.

It totally describes some guys! STUPID. huh lol.

Read mine, and give feedback. thanks :)

 
daniec said...
Mar. 7, 2011 at 11:09 am
OMG i love this poem im living that right now even though he isnt a brunette.And its in the same catagory as my poem Why i cry read and post a comment. Please
 
Ddog said...
Mar. 6, 2011 at 12:07 pm
I like this poem. This reminds me of a friend I have who is atracted to a jerk. Are we call atracted to stupid guys!? Any way, good job:)
 
Jakson5Freak said...
Mar. 3, 2011 at 6:32 pm
its a great poem. really great.
 
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