Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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on May. 12 2011 at 8:23 am
Awful story. it needs alot of work, i hated it.
- Chloe Welsh

on May. 12 2011 at 8:22 am
good story. sorta.

chloe said...
on May. 12 2011 at 8:11 am
Chicken Noddle soup.

RueLove BRONZE said...
on May. 12 2011 at 7:58 am
RueLove BRONZE, Columbus, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"I gonna hug you!" -Gir

I love it. This is how I feel. This guy has me wrapped around his finger and he doesn't care if he hurts me. I love this poem and you go on with your work. It's amazing. :)

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on May. 12 2011 at 12:25 am
Malsie8 GOLD, Placentia, California
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Favorite Quote:
"All we have to decide is what to do with the time that is given to us"
-Lord of the Rings

loved it :D

genesis c said...
on May. 11 2011 at 8:57 pm
i really love this! i

on May. 11 2011 at 5:32 pm
NothingSpecial BRONZE, Conifer, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
They teach us to stand out; yet they smash us into groups; they teach us to be happy; yet they demoralize us as life moves on; they teach us to listen; yet they ignore our questions; think about it. The teaching and learning system is screwed up.

I love this poem so much!!! In a way it kinda makes me laugh inside! But i love it!!!

on May. 9 2011 at 2:07 pm
katibug919 BRONZE, Red House, West Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Me? Sarcastic? Im way to ditzy to grasp the concept of mockery"

This is about the most amazing poem ive read on here so far! I can completly relate....Guys are jerks in SOOO many ways and yet....You still fall in love. I love it!!              and if you would, check out my poems. I have one on here similar...

on May. 9 2011 at 9:44 am
CrystalMarie GOLD, Steubenville, Ohio
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This is really good!

on May. 6 2011 at 1:41 pm
__horizon133 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"laugh, and the world laughs with you. laugh hysterically, and for no apparent reason, and they will leave you alone." anonymous

very, very good, and well writen. but don't take my word for it--you're in the magazine! check out my poems sometime, too.

on May. 5 2011 at 2:13 pm
Ayeee, this was really good. I read this aloud to my class right? And they loved it. Good Job! Seriously, write more. Buhhh Byee. I love you<3 We should sooo chill sometime.

on May. 5 2011 at 2:11 pm
Daniosopuppy BRONZE, Sarasota, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"They say love is in the air so... I hold my breath till my face turn purple."-Lil Wayne

I am in love with your poem no joke! I show it to like everyone! It completely describes this guy that i know(; ahhh<3 legit this is Perfect<3

on May. 4 2011 at 5:31 pm
brithers BRONZE, Telford, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
“It's a metaphor, see: You put the killing thing right between your teeth, but you don't give it the power to do its killing.”

I love this!!! sooo good :)

on May. 2 2011 at 3:40 pm
SavvyCake1 SILVER, Florissant, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Light up the darkness" off of the movie I Am Legend

i like it. i think its great.

 


on May. 1 2011 at 12:55 pm
PrettyLittleDarling SILVER, Taylorsville, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"Sweatpants, hair tied, chillin with no make up on, that's when you the prettiest, I hope you dont take it wrong" Drake

this is the perfect poem for me your writting just spoke everythink my heart is saying :) amazing

on Apr. 29 2011 at 1:17 pm
FacebookAddict11, Grandville, Michigan
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I love this one, good use of rhymes by the way, Keep up the good work

on Apr. 29 2011 at 10:48 am
Rachael12 BRONZE, Michigan
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Great ending!! I really enjoyed reading your poem :)

KitKate BRONZE said...
on Apr. 29 2011 at 10:38 am
KitKate BRONZE, Grand Rapids, Michigan
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SOO TRUE! I can relate as well! nicely worded:)

on Apr. 29 2011 at 10:33 am
ehascher BRONZE, Michigan
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Really good! I can totally relate. I love the second stanza :)

 


jillster12 said...
on Apr. 28 2011 at 9:29 pm
Great, so true </3


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