Jerk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

January 2, 2009
I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.

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chloe said...
May 12, 2011 at 8:11 am
Chicken Noddle soup.
Determinate said...
May 12, 2011 at 7:58 am
I love it. This is how I feel. This guy has me wrapped around his finger and he doesn't care if he hurts me. I love this poem and you go on with your work. It's amazing. :)
Malsie8 said...
May 12, 2011 at 12:25 am
loved it :D
genesis c said...
May 11, 2011 at 8:57 pm
i really love this! i
bieberkelbo101 replied...
May 12, 2011 at 4:27 pm
Mee too!!!!:)
genesis c replied...
May 19, 2011 at 11:12 pm
especially that my boyfriend is one too , welll ex :T
DontForgetMeYet said...
May 11, 2011 at 5:32 pm
I love this poem so much!!! In a way it kinda makes me laugh inside! But i love it!!!
MichaelsGirl25 said...
May 9, 2011 at 2:07 pm
This is about the most amazing poem ive read on here so far! I can completly relate....Guys are jerks in SOOO many ways and yet....You still fall in love. I love it!!              and if you would, check out my poems. I have one on here similar...
CrystalMarie said...
May 9, 2011 at 9:44 am
This is really good!
qui133 said...
May 6, 2011 at 1:41 pm
very, very good, and well writen. but don't take my word for it--you're in the magazine! check out my poems sometime, too.
Cortaysiaaaa. ;) said...
May 5, 2011 at 2:13 pm
Ayeee, this was really good. I read this aloud to my class right? And they loved it. Good Job! Seriously, write more. Buhhh Byee. I love you<3 We should sooo chill sometime.
Daniosopuppy said...
May 5, 2011 at 2:11 pm
I am in love with your poem no joke! I show it to like everyone! It completely describes this guy that i know(; ahhh<3 legit this is Perfect<3
bri-bear said...
May 4, 2011 at 5:31 pm
I love this!!! sooo good :)
SavvyCake1 said...
May 2, 2011 at 3:40 pm

i like it. i think its great.


PrettyLittleDarling said...
May 1, 2011 at 12:55 pm
this is the perfect poem for me your writting just spoke everythink my heart is saying :) amazing
FacebookAddict11 said...
Apr. 29, 2011 at 1:17 pm
I love this one, good use of rhymes by the way, Keep up the good work
Rachael12 said...
Apr. 29, 2011 at 10:48 am
Great ending!! I really enjoyed reading your poem :)
Katelyn V. said...
Apr. 29, 2011 at 10:38 am
SOO TRUE! I can relate as well! nicely worded:)
ehascher said...
Apr. 29, 2011 at 10:33 am

Really good! I can totally relate. I love the second stanza :)


jillster12 said...
Apr. 28, 2011 at 9:29 pm
Great, so true </3
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