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Jerk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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summer101 said...
Apr. 20, 2011 at 5:03 pm
CUTE!!! I love it it!!!
 
HayWay said...
Apr. 20, 2011 at 4:17 pm
I Love it!!!!! it was really easy to understand and easy to read :)
 
xxrockerxxcutiexxxx said...
Apr. 20, 2011 at 2:45 pm
i luv it, its so cute
 
whatsbehindthissmile said...
Apr. 20, 2011 at 1:09 pm
This is so good! Nice language! I could really picture "the jerk" (: keep writing!
 
nnaattaasshhaax3 said...
Apr. 20, 2011 at 1:03 pm
Cuuutttteee. (:
 
soaringeagle435 said...
Apr. 20, 2011 at 11:45 am
love it!!!!!!!!!!
 
Byrdgirl13 said...
Apr. 20, 2011 at 10:00 am
this is s sweet :) i lve it
 
vampier said...
Apr. 20, 2011 at 8:33 am
wow that is some thing that is reaily reily good that's more than i could have done. noe joke
 
JiminMintyFresh said...
Apr. 19, 2011 at 9:49 pm
I love this poem! The descriptions are fabulous and I wish I can write like this. There is a also a good rythm in this poem when I read it aloud.
 
S1a1j said...
Apr. 19, 2011 at 9:02 pm
wow! I love this poem. The subject matter is really simple yet fantastic and very relatable.
 
ExpRESsY0uRselF said...
Apr. 18, 2011 at 4:32 pm
This poem was insanely rrealistic, omg, I love how the topic was so relatable. BTW, if you have time, please check out, comment on, and rate my poems, The Girl Inside, Remembering Spring, and You Are the Lyrics In Me. Thanks so much!!! 8)
 
Eleganta123 said...
Apr. 17, 2011 at 7:35 pm
im in the same situation. Hes a cute jerk. well done :D .
 
Emelyx3 said...
Apr. 16, 2011 at 6:22 pm
This Poem Is Amazing. iLove It. ♥
 
Horsesluvme<3 said...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 8:24 pm
This was an awsome poem i loved it!!!
 
PeaceLovePiggy said...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 6:29 pm
I LOVE IT. IT'S AWESOME.
 
GraceSanchez said...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 1:31 pm
Aww i love this poem :') this is soo cute
 
Melody V. said...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 1:23 pm
Hey! Your poem is really sweet. I really like it. I can really relate to it. I LOVE IT!!
 
Alina R. said...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 1:20 pm
i like this poem matter fact love it it show that even though hes a jerk you still love him that is very meaning ful
 
Melody V. replied...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 1:24 pm
lml alinaaaaaaaa HUH-TSSS
 
LiveInTheMoment said...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 12:40 pm
This poem was very interesting and unique. I loved how it's about something most teenage girls can relate to. If you have time, please check out and comment on my first poem, The Girl Inside. Thanks!
 
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