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Jerk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.





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mattisonteeter said...
Nov. 2, 2011 at 5:58 pm:

This flows so well! I appreciate this poem and you're writting.

This is a pretty generic question but if you get the chance would you mind looking at a few of my poems?

thanks

 
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Adrianna.A. said...
Oct. 31, 2011 at 10:21 pm:
I really liked this piece, It was well written. :) Good job. 
 
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poundz said...
Oct. 29, 2011 at 5:16 pm:
amazing poem! theres a jerk who i love <3 he is a TRUE JERK to me but i can't seem to pull away
 
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Lionheart said...
Oct. 27, 2011 at 9:04 pm:
You are a genius! I really connect to this poem because theres a jerk that i'm in love with but I can't have. Great poem!
 
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Kpalo14 said...
Oct. 27, 2011 at 4:41 pm:
Very good poem!
 
brat 101 replied...
Dec. 8, 2011 at 2:05 pm :
is was very good loved how it was going on
 
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horsewriter4evr said...
Oct. 25, 2011 at 6:12 pm:
this is an awesome peom! one of my favorites!
 
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Savannah515 said...
Oct. 24, 2011 at 10:41 pm:
Amazing poem! It rhymes perfectly. U should get it published outside of teen ink like when u write a book and get it published. That is what u should do with this poem. Sorry that didnt make any sense.
 
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KeyyRenaee234 said...
Oct. 24, 2011 at 2:49 pm:
Great Poem(:
 
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GirlWhoWrote said...
Oct. 23, 2011 at 8:14 am:
this is really good! Check out my work! :)
 
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Dudet95 said...
Oct. 22, 2011 at 11:09 am:
This is very good!!This is exactly how most girls think of guys:)lol I love the whole cocky smirk part.That made me crack up lol and I love the jerk theme to this.When I read this it is as if you are reading my mind.ha I love the rhyme to this, and It all forms together perfectly.You are a amazing writer:)
 
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SammyD.1722 said...
Oct. 21, 2011 at 9:06 pm:
wow I loved it and trust me when I say this is the story of my life :/
 
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Thetoxicglamour said...
Oct. 21, 2011 at 4:21 am:
This is like the definition of teenage girls lovelife! like seriously, you captured it perfectly
 
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Narene_baby said...
Oct. 21, 2011 at 12:08 am:
Honestly I love this sooo much! :D It has every girl written all over. If You have time you should check out my poems. Just want some feedback
 
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Kayroxy101This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 17, 2011 at 7:24 pm:
This is perfect :)
 
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GreenActressThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 17, 2011 at 4:51 pm:
This litterally is as if I wrote it myself because it's so true to me! I love it! Great job! Keep writing!
 
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flawless200 said...
Oct. 13, 2011 at 11:11 am:
Really good. I saw this one in the mag and had to let this person know his is AWESOME keep writing for my  sake please!!! :)
 
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AEMarcher2395 said...
Oct. 12, 2011 at 10:39 pm:

I really this, everyones known one of these.. Great job.! =]

Check out my page and let me know what you think guys.. Thanks alot. 

 
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Untamable said...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 2:50 pm:
this kinda decribes my last relationship. lol..
 
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Kristi184 said...
Oct. 10, 2011 at 3:58 pm:

that is really good...i know a few people like that

 

 
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