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Jerk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.





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Tyrome said...
Sept. 13, 2011 at 10:26 am:
You made a nice poem
 
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tyron babee said...
Sept. 13, 2011 at 10:26 am:
Beast poem swaggdummies here
 
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undone said...
Sept. 13, 2011 at 9:00 am:
I love this poem and its so true its like that with most guys this poem is great!!! :)
 
JA cob replied...
Sept. 13, 2011 at 10:27 am :
He he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he :D
 
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panda97 said...
Sept. 12, 2011 at 10:05 am:

i think this poem meant alot i cant get over how i says a girl can klike someone so much but at he same time think hes a jerk beware girls boys hva that power

 

 
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Poe(: said...
Sept. 12, 2011 at 10:04 am:
I've fell inlove with so many jerks I like this poems its great!!
 
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LynnMaria_17 said...
Sept. 11, 2011 at 12:22 pm:
<3 i love this
 
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Alice123 said...
Sept. 8, 2011 at 8:32 pm:
honestly i woves it!!!!!! 
 
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Alice123 said...
Sept. 8, 2011 at 8:28 pm:
not despreate just true
 
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Margara3 said...
Sept. 6, 2011 at 10:14 am:
I love this poem. This poem gives a good insight on the author’s emotions. I agree that it sounds a little desperate, but don’t most people feel in some point of their life desperate to gets someone’s attention. When you love someone everything you do may seem okay to you, but other people may see it as being desperate. Don’t listen to anyone just do what your heart tells you.
 
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green_eyes17 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 4, 2011 at 4:18 pm:
Ahaha this is so true. The abrupt lines really get the terse, semi-annoyed nature of it without being harsh. Nicely done. :) 
 
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Scott_Pilgrim331 said...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 2:00 pm:
This story is packed with emotions and has a good beggining.
 
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Eric R. said...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 1:35 pm:
It actually shows a true story what happens with couples.
 
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AbigailSolorzano said...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 1:19 pm:
i really enjoyed reading this poem, it describes exactly what a girl/guy goes throughs. the fact that you're really into someone, even though you know you shouldnt feel anything for them.
 
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love or hate said...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 12:47 pm:
i love this peotry. because she not telling the boy .to his face she writing down n saying how she feel about him .
 
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Inez1234 said...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 10:58 am:
Despreate!!!!!!!!
 
abigailmc95 replied...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 10:59 am :
I know what you mean man!!
 
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abigailmc95 said...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 10:54 am:
Your poem sounded a little despreate and whinny, but it was ok.
 
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Aide T. said...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 10:50 am:
I found it interesting. I like the way the writer listed a bunch of beautiful things about one person and at the described them as a jerk. I think its the kind of thing you would dedicate to your awful ex.
 
rachaelautrey replied...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 1:08 pm :
valeria :) <3
 
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