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Jerk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.





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abear23 said...
Nov. 4, 2011 at 9:26 pm:
This is soo true. it really flows well. keep writing. ur awesome
 
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Sing88 said...
Nov. 4, 2011 at 8:30 pm:
very well written and descriptive I enjoyed it immensely
 
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JuneTaz said...
Nov. 4, 2011 at 5:45 pm:
Love how yu took an insult and mixed it with something romantic and sweet. Really sticks out. Four stars!
 
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DebbieShamThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 4, 2011 at 5:34 pm:

Haha can totally relate!

Very nice:)

 
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Mary2016 said...
Nov. 4, 2011 at 5:26 pm:
I've read this poem over and over and I absolutely love it!
 
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jruth said...
Nov. 4, 2011 at 1:01 pm:
Excellent poem, I can totally relate to having that feeling about a guy. Check out my work if ya want :). 
 
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aurorairis said...
Nov. 4, 2011 at 8:48 am:

Great job! You capture this emotion so perfectly!

Please comment on some of my work!

 
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BriBear94 said...
Nov. 3, 2011 at 10:22 am:
I love this, it totally relates to what I'm going through right now! nice job!;)
 
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mattisonteeter said...
Nov. 2, 2011 at 5:58 pm:

This flows so well! I appreciate this poem and you're writting.

This is a pretty generic question but if you get the chance would you mind looking at a few of my poems?

thanks

 
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Adrianna.A. said...
Oct. 31, 2011 at 10:21 pm:
I really liked this piece, It was well written. :) Good job. 
 
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poundz said...
Oct. 29, 2011 at 5:16 pm:
amazing poem! theres a jerk who i love <3 he is a TRUE JERK to me but i can't seem to pull away
 
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Lionheart said...
Oct. 27, 2011 at 9:04 pm:
You are a genius! I really connect to this poem because theres a jerk that i'm in love with but I can't have. Great poem!
 
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Kpalo14 said...
Oct. 27, 2011 at 4:41 pm:
Very good poem!
 
brat 101 replied...
Dec. 8, 2011 at 2:05 pm :
is was very good loved how it was going on
 
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horsewriter4evr said...
Oct. 25, 2011 at 6:12 pm:
this is an awesome peom! one of my favorites!
 
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Savannah515 said...
Oct. 24, 2011 at 10:41 pm:
Amazing poem! It rhymes perfectly. U should get it published outside of teen ink like when u write a book and get it published. That is what u should do with this poem. Sorry that didnt make any sense.
 
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KeyyRenaee234 said...
Oct. 24, 2011 at 2:49 pm:
Great Poem(:
 
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GirlWhoWrote said...
Oct. 23, 2011 at 8:14 am:
this is really good! Check out my work! :)
 
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Dudet95 said...
Oct. 22, 2011 at 11:09 am:
This is very good!!This is exactly how most girls think of guys:)lol I love the whole cocky smirk part.That made me crack up lol and I love the jerk theme to this.When I read this it is as if you are reading my mind.ha I love the rhyme to this, and It all forms together perfectly.You are a amazing writer:)
 
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SammyD.1722 said...
Oct. 21, 2011 at 9:06 pm:
wow I loved it and trust me when I say this is the story of my life :/
 
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