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Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 26 comments

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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on Apr. 8 2012 at 8:45 am
Maddie_Rae PLATINUM, Newalla, Oklahoma
20 articles 8 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
I write my life in ink, that way i can still remember the good things, and yet i can never erase my mistakes.

Wonderful poem, it flowed very well.

on Apr. 6 2012 at 2:44 pm
Neon_Gypsy_Blood BRONZE, Idaho Falls, Idaho
3 articles 0 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do or do not, there is no try.
~Master Yoda~

Ugh! I hate it when i like a guy thats sort of a jerk to me! Cute peom though! :) Keep up the good work!

on Apr. 3 2012 at 11:24 am
Latina_Princess SILVER, Clymer, Pennsylvania
6 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And so, the lion fell in love with the lamb, what a stupid lamb. What a sick Massaquistic lion." from Twilight.

its a guyish poem...HAHAHAHAHA...:0

on Mar. 28 2012 at 3:34 pm
Alvar-Knight SILVER, Harlingen, Texas
7 articles 5 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
what is said flies,
what is written never dies.

hahaha. i love this peom it reminds me of my jerk. i never though i could find a poem that could fit the one i love.

on Mar. 27 2012 at 3:01 pm
writer3499 GOLD, New Bedford, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 196 comments

Favorite Quote:
"it's impossible to live without failing at something, unless you live so cautiously that you might has well not have lived at all-in which case you fail by default."
-J.K.Rowling

This was so good! I love it.

on Mar. 23 2012 at 12:01 pm
ImJustAGuy BRONZE, Oakland, California
2 articles 0 photos 22 comments
I love this, it's hard to explain my feelings for this in words (: please check out some of my writing ! I'm a new and upcoming pet !

Megzzie SILVER said...
on Mar. 19 2012 at 6:03 pm
Megzzie SILVER, Auburn, Maine
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Amazing! Just great! Really captures what the real life is when it comes to guys.

on Mar. 18 2012 at 11:08 pm
HappyEverAfter SILVER, Rhinelander, Wisconsin
7 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Whoever said anything was possible obviously never tried slammimg a revolving door." -unknown

I love this! The best part of this poem, at least to me, is the first four lines. I love them! 

LalalLULUL said...
on Mar. 16 2012 at 12:23 pm
OMG THIS IS TOOO TRUE

on Mar. 15 2012 at 6:12 pm
ClaudeTheDemonButler BRONZE, Poca, West Virginia
2 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Even in the dark i see the light

this is an increadible poem

lil.awol ELITE said...
on Mar. 15 2012 at 11:29 am
lil.awol ELITE, Independence, Missouri
124 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"there's a darkness upon me that's flooded in light, and i'm frightened by those that don't see it" ~the avett brothers, head full of doubt

OMG i love this so much. the fact that i actually just said OMG proves that lol. i don't have to tell you how good it is bc you already have many comments doing that. but this fits a situation i'm in right now to a T.

on Mar. 15 2012 at 9:59 am
dramagurl13 GOLD, West Jordan, Utah
13 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are too many phrases that don't make sense! Such as- "Today has been a long day." Hello? Each day is 24 hrs, last time I checked. And "No news is good news." Umm... what if they were kidnapped? Or they were murdered? Stupid English language.

My guy drives me nuts, but he isn't a jerk. He is super nice- but great poem anyway!

on Mar. 13 2012 at 7:49 pm
writingandwondering BRONZE, Downers Grove, Illinois
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Wow, this is amazing! Great job with emotion and detail! I can totally relate and thought of a situation of mine the whole time! Great job grabing and holding the readers attention! Nicely done, keep writing I would love to read more! You've got talent!

on Mar. 10 2012 at 2:56 pm
MiaUnwritten GOLD, West Palm Beach, Florida
11 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Let the eyes seek what the mind cannot
Let the eyes judge what the mind cannot
Let the eyes believe what the mind failed to"

Cool, it reminds me of my special jerk

on Mar. 2 2012 at 8:22 pm
Megan_LizFan GOLD, Centralia, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."

This is really good! I can really relate to this! Keep up the good work :)

on Feb. 22 2012 at 6:04 pm
crazyartist13 BRONZE, Free Union, Virginia
1 article 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can do anything through He that strengthens me.

I really love and understand this poem...I can really relate to it. Great job!!

on Feb. 22 2012 at 3:06 pm
MarleyRainbow PLATINUM, Valles MInes, Missouri
40 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
one good thing about music is, when it hits you, you feel no pain.

you love a jerk?? why

Capt.Ahhoy2 said...
on Feb. 22 2012 at 1:14 pm
Capt.Ahhoy2, Yuma, Arizona
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
“I laugh, I love, I hope, I try, I hurt, I need, I fear, I cry. And I know you do the same things too, So we're really not that different, me and you.” - Colin Raye

"If I had to live my life again, I'd make the same mistakes, only sooner."~Tallul

"Name a shrub after me – something prickly and hard to eradicate."~Jack Aubery, Master and commander
"Capt. Jack Aubrey: Well, Stephen … the bird's flightless?
Dr. Stephen Maturin: Yes.
Capt. Jack Aubrey: It's not going anywhere."~ Master and commander
"Do you not know that in the service … one must always choose the lesser of two weevils?"~Jack Aubery, Master and commander

I can understand it, though I was once that jerk.

MMorton said...
on Feb. 22 2012 at 8:09 am
MMorton, N/A, North Carolina
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I relate. I see your point and I can totally get jerks.

on Feb. 19 2012 at 9:08 pm
albealer SILVER, Bluffton, South Carolina
5 articles 2 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Imagination is more important than knowledge. Knowledge is Limited. Imagination encircles the world."~Albert Einstein

omg i love this. its awesome and i can totally relate.