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Uncertainty
Uncertainty
What kind of life can this lead?
You're pressing me
You're pushing me
How much longer can I bleed?
Stop using me
Stop wasting me
When will you just accept me?
He's holding me
He's loving me
Why can't I just be me?
Patiently
Patiently
I'm waiting 'till you see
Why can't you finally see?




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SundanceChildThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 15 at 11:34 am:
Very well written. This poem is so intense and yet so simple. It gives the reader (me) a sense of such hopelessness and a feeling of being lost. Good job.
 
KillerPantsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 15 at 3:42 pm :
Thank you! I appreciate it :)
 
SundanceChildThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 15 at 8:17 pm :
Your welcome!
 
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