Pressure

January 10, 2013
By EdieGraffiti GOLD, Idaho Falls, Idaho
EdieGraffiti GOLD, Idaho Falls, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
But she knows she has a curse on her, a curse she cannot win. For if someone gets too close to her the pins stick farther in.


Uncertainty
Uncertainty
What kind of life can this lead?
You're pressing me
You're pushing me
How much longer can I bleed?
Stop using me
Stop wasting me
When will you just accept me?
He's holding me
He's loving me
Why can't I just be me?
Patiently
Patiently
I'm waiting 'till you see
Why can't you finally see?



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on Jan. 15 2013 at 8:17 pm
SundanceChild BRONZE, Farmington, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
The question isn't who's going to let me, its who's going to STOP ME. -Ayn Rand-

Your welcome!

on Jan. 15 2013 at 3:42 pm
EdieGraffiti GOLD, Idaho Falls, Idaho
15 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
But she knows she has a curse on her, a curse she cannot win. For if someone gets too close to her the pins stick farther in.

Thank you! I appreciate it :)

on Jan. 15 2013 at 11:34 am
SundanceChild BRONZE, Farmington, New Mexico
2 articles 2 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
The question isn't who's going to let me, its who's going to STOP ME. -Ayn Rand-

Very well written. This poem is so intense and yet so simple. It gives the reader (me) a sense of such hopelessness and a feeling of being lost. Good job.


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