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Yellow Rose

October 7, 2012
By Cami98 GOLD, San Antonio, Texas
Cami98 GOLD, San Antonio, Texas
15 articles 1 photo 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You is kind, you is smart, you is important"


To be a child, a child, when love was free,
When the trees stood tall, and all things could speak.

A child, bounding at ease, through Autumn’s,
Chilling,
And
Fallen debris.

In a land, which is now a dream, a little girl plays make believe
Doing what for centuries has been done before,
She sings a song, a callow tune.

Forever young it may seem, but look out; time comes more hurriedly than once perceived.

She happens upon a yellow rose, its alluring bloom,
She brings up close

But not before she feels a prick, blood drips,
She instantly feels sick

Impeccable,
Youthful,
Innocence, no longer,
As she discovers the painful beauty that is a flower

A single tear escapes her eye, a shrill yelp her throat,
Which is sure to denote, sending a chilling tingle down my spine,
As the wind blows

She then resumes her callow tune, because after all,
She is but a youth

But never again will she forget that vexing day,
When she stood small, and all things could speak


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PLEASE READ, and THINK. COMMENTS and feedback are greatly appreciated.

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Cami98 GOLD said...
on Oct. 15 2012 at 8:07 pm
Cami98 GOLD, San Antonio, Texas
15 articles 1 photo 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You is kind, you is smart, you is important"

haha thanks:)

on Oct. 15 2012 at 8:04 pm
TraceBatWingsAndBrokenStrings DIAMOND, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
52 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
"This gun has stopped time in its tracks, has altered the course of our fate. Destiny is shattered and timeless. Closed eyes feel the cold winds embrace."
-Avenged Sevenfold

There is a lot of beautiful imagery in this, and the whole thing seems to have a sense of flow to it. Great job :)