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Oh why have we settled in the unquiet darkness,
where the noise of the silence overwhelms our hearts?
And we fall apart –
the sun sets and it rises –
we make shapes of ourselves no one can see.
Oh why are we lost in these tears
if we’ve forgotten how to cry?
If absence makes the heart grow fonder
can we hold on much longer?
We are burning in a drought of faith,
unnoticing as the stars are earnestly shining,
desperately bleeding light.
Oh how ironically hopeless
is every star’s forgotten fight,
for we are just uselessly drowning
under the weight,
under the honesty of the unspoken.
Oh the noise of the silence overwhelms our hearts.
I believe we are skillfully crafted
inexplicable accidents,
and our hero – the potter –
is too late.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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armygirl4larsen said...
Feb. 16, 2010 at 12:59 pm
This is fantastic the images that you paint for the mind are beautiful and alerting. Im in awe of how wonderful this is. Keep up the good work.
 
alicecullen said...
Feb. 16, 2010 at 9:54 am
great poem! could you read some of my poems and stories? i really need some feedback from people! i need to see if i could improve anything! i really would appreciate it!
 
sunnyhunny This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 16, 2010 at 8:34 am
wow, I love it!
 
Robertojm said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 10:00 pm
That was very Moving to me
 
turpenevan said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 8:39 pm
This is great. Silence is a virtue.
check out mine please, Sole Ambition. It relates well.
 
♫Musicloving♫ said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 11:55 am
that was beautiful
 
Pensivegurl replied...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 5:24 pm
I'll have to agree. O.O
 
Listentomelistentomyheart said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 10:35 am
This work truly had the power to move and chill to the bone, while maintaining a centre in the fierce debate of reality. Inspiration.
I think you and your readers might enjoy my work. It is only the work of a beginner, but I hope you have a read.
Thanks ;)
 
ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 3, 2010 at 1:46 pm
This is very beautiful. Good job!
 
imaginewhirrledpeas said...
Jan. 3, 2010 at 12:22 pm
that was so powerful and moving. absolutely love it!! i can't think of how else to describe it. beautiful. its on my favorites list now :)
 
That1LostGirl replied...
Jan. 3, 2010 at 2:14 pm
HIII(: haha
good review
i agree(:
 
Courtney G. said...
Dec. 12, 2009 at 8:54 pm
I loved it
 
Siraidly said...
Dec. 12, 2009 at 4:19 pm
heavy on the ambiguity
 
kheart said...
Dec. 12, 2009 at 11:11 am
Great work!
 
LordManfred said...
Dec. 12, 2009 at 6:40 am
keep on the good work.
 
whale entrails said...
Nov. 20, 2009 at 7:44 pm
yes. we are all accidents. thank you for noticing. :3
 
toxic.monkey said...
Nov. 20, 2009 at 9:40 am
this reminds me of the old poet omar khayyam- also spoke of a potter and us being beautifully crafted pots... nice poem:D
 
Abigail G. said...
Oct. 29, 2009 at 10:35 pm
Lovely. You've used large words and rather than clogging up the poem, it has given it a fluied feeling, like a river.
 
writer24/7/365 said...
Oct. 29, 2009 at 9:05 pm
luv it so much
 
screenname! said...
Oct. 29, 2009 at 7:17 pm
I am not an accident I know I was skillfully crafted By a potter And that potter, well to you, it might be different But to me, that potter is Jesus ! Thumbs up on your poem! I loved it!
 
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