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The Plan

May 7, 2008
By Jason Threm, Cincinnati, OH

The Plan

Take the grotesque smelling Demon
Bring it back
For the sake of the people
And the fate of the world
Attack the gaunt and castle like fortress
Like a mob and get my demon now

With the people
We will infiltrate the fortress
Take every thing back
Notes that were to be shared with the world
Defend the race of demons
Run out of the house bring him to me now

Help the world
Save him from Kong now
Take him back
To me Kong has a fortress
Save the people
There and then the demon

The People
Can spare such little help to our world
And can’t help the demons
In the encumbered fortress
Just for now
Until the lockdown ends and they are back

The fortress
Is in front of us now
And the looks like a goat, demon
Ready to take back to our world
The time stream breaks and demons come back
And all run, no, just all people

The fortress back
Demons in our world
Now the people have returned
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Kiana_M BRONZE said...
on Aug. 14 2009 at 5:41 pm
Kiana_M BRONZE, Miami, Florida
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I really love it. I think it's clear, it has a lot of meaning to it. People could look at it in many different ways. You're style is very unique, please keep writing =)I'd like to see more from you. - Kiana (Do you mind rating my latest poem? =/)

on Oct. 18 2008 at 8:59 pm
Overall, this isn't such a bad piece. However, you could make the subject more clear. Also, in the third line in the second stanza, "everything" is one word.


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