Stand Together

June 2, 2008
A woman with a stolen purse
Stands in a bookstore
To tell the manager that someone used her credit card
In this store
To buy DVDs

As the woman talks to the manager
A man walks in
To return eight DVDs for cash
The man and woman didn’t recognize each other

The manager stares at the receipt
Then goes to look at the man and woman
The manger realizes
The DVDs that were bought by the woman’s credit card
Was on the receipt

The man that stands next to the woman
The thief

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Farmer said...
Feb. 25, 2011 at 9:45 am
It was a pretty good poem.  It could have show alittle more but otherwise it was good.
Sarah B. said...
Feb. 25, 2011 at 9:43 am
I liked this poem becaue it was precise and to the point. I could also really picture the whole poem. However, I feel if you add more detail into the poem, it would make it stronger.
writer62 said...
Jul. 20, 2010 at 9:47 am
good job. short and to the point but still very interesting! I really enjoyed reading it! Good job ...
Mirror_Of_You said...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 2:34 am

lol. *gasp*

I think it's a good poem... but seems more like a discription/scene out of a short story. Good suspense


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