The Season of Fall

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Leaves are falling everywhere.
Red, gold, orange, and yellow there are many colors.
Squirrels store food to eat during winter.
Birds fly south for warmer weather.
Bears prepare for a long sleep.

Children prepare for a long day at school.
Nights are longer and days are shorter.
The roads are littered with leaves.
Everydody prepares for a great Thanksgiving.
Fall is a wonderful season.





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dule_91 said...
Jan. 23, 2009 at 8:31 pm
Well, i like all the things that you listed on here which made you think fall is your favourite season. But i agree with the others that you should work on it more and realize it lacks rhythm
 
=D said...
Jan. 7, 2009 at 4:31 am
dude its winter.
 
JJ Jones said...
Dec. 11, 2008 at 12:40 pm
I love fallll!!!! lol this poem is full of surprises everyone who doesn't like this is dum
 
Debaser12 said...
Dec. 11, 2008 at 9:27 am
I think it's hilarious that this is one of the top poems on Teen Ink
 
blueberrymuffinadict said...
Dec. 2, 2008 at 1:52 am
kinda dull
 
JennyJenJ said...
Nov. 25, 2008 at 5:00 am
yea... it's pretty but lacking rhythm. it was a big list, Tess.
 
tippity tapper said...
Nov. 12, 2008 at 9:07 pm
i like the idea, but its not quite in poem form...maybe write an article?
 
awsomeaugust said...
Nov. 11, 2008 at 12:01 am
Fall is my favorite season, and these are all very true statements, but statements really and not much more. If you like the fall, really try to think about why. If you do this, I think it would be a wonderful poem (not that it's not good right now)
 
swingin me! said...
Nov. 10, 2008 at 9:09 pm
why is this the top article? it doesnt seem like such a great poem... it was very... unfinished. work on it okay?
 
Austin said...
Nov. 10, 2008 at 7:28 pm
From writer to writer, your use of diction seems remedial and the imagery seems redunant at best. Work on your poetry and maybe it may improve dramatically.
 
tweedle dee said...
Nov. 10, 2008 at 1:49 pm
i agree with tess brooks, good ideas but they could have been put into a better form. keep trying though!
 
K.J.G.Santos said...
Oct. 24, 2008 at 1:37 am
agreed.
 
Tess Brooks said...
Oct. 18, 2008 at 3:32 pm
Liked your imagery, but i didnt like how you just listed everything.
 
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