My Love Unspoken

January 25, 2010
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My love unspoken
mangetsu no awai
yoru ga kurai
jinsei wa nani desu ka ?
kono eien no tatakai
watashi no ai , kore made no kyori
watashi no kokoro ni musubitsui te iru
watashi no naka no ry?
anata no shizuka de ochitsui ta desu
anata wa itsumo soko desu
watashi no namida wo kans? sa seru to watashi wo norikoeru ni yakudatsu
dono y? ni o ai ni ki ta tte ?
sono h?h? wo tent? suki deshi ta ka ?
dono y? ni watashi no hont? no ai ni naru no desu ka ?
shikkari to watashi wo hoji jin?j?ra
anata wa watashi wo hanareru koto wa nai yo oshie te kudasai
watashi no koibito koibito…

English translation

Pale as the moon
Dark as the night
What life is this?
This eternal fight
My love so far away
Is tied to my heart
The dragon in me
Is calmed by your tranquility
You always are there
To dry my tears and help me pull through
How is it that we came to meet?
Was it love that lit the way?
How did you become my true love?
Hold me tight and never let go
Tell me that you'll never leave me
My love

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Alon_Freevoice said...
Jul. 31, 2011 at 7:49 pm
Oh, you're Asian?
Yuelong replied...
Jul. 31, 2011 at 11:25 pm
i'm half chinese, but i take japanese
katie-cat said...
Jun. 7, 2010 at 5:18 pm
I liked it, it was cute :)  Although, I was wondering, when I was looking through your stuff you had like chapter two and three but I couldn't find a chapter one?  Is it on here, because I'd like to read it?  :)   (Could you check out some of my stuff, too please?)  Thanks!!
Yuelong replied...
Jun. 8, 2010 at 11:47 am

it's all there, here's the links:

hope it helps!

MyFairyTaleEnding said...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 9:21 pm
WOW!!!!!!!!! That was really really good!!! It's so beautiful and well thought! Keep it up! :)
yuekomai replied...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 3:55 pm
i'm not just a poet. i'm a fiction writer too, although i hate bragging. do you like angels? my other articles are about that. i'm not spoiling the rest for you.
MyFairyTaleEnding replied...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 5:48 pm
Yes, as a matter of fact I do. I read some of the first chapter of your story. I plan to read the rest when I have more time. So far it's amazing!
yuekomai replied...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 6:09 pm
glad you like it. =)
Ramoth said...
Feb. 5, 2010 at 7:36 pm
sorry! some of the letters got replaced with question marks!
Firetoungue replied...
Mar. 6, 2010 at 6:23 pm
I love it. I like how you have the first poem in Japanese I think it is. Sounds a lot like it. I love the poem all together. I love the first couple lines a lot.
yuekomai replied...
Mar. 6, 2010 at 6:36 pm
it is japanese. they're the same poem. i know some japanese but not a lot. i went on google translate to help me out, i wrote the english version though.
Firetoungue replied...
Mar. 6, 2010 at 11:20 pm
Still, that is really cool you know some Japanese. I'm learning it right now.
Google is the best if you want a quick translation. Thank the internet.
Was a pretty poem. Loved it.
Ramoth said...
Feb. 5, 2010 at 7:34 pm
does anyone like it?
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