My Love Unspoken

January 25, 2010
By Yuelong GOLD, Bellevue, Washington
Yuelong GOLD, Bellevue, Washington
17 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
Win the Darwin award already!


My love unspoken
mangetsu no awai
yoru ga kurai
jinsei wa nani desu ka ?
kono eien no tatakai
watashi no ai , kore made no kyori
watashi no kokoro ni musubitsui te iru
watashi no naka no ry?
anata no shizuka de ochitsui ta desu
anata wa itsumo soko desu
watashi no namida wo kans? sa seru to watashi wo norikoeru ni yakudatsu
dono y? ni o ai ni ki ta tte ?
sono h?h? wo tent? suki deshi ta ka ?
dono y? ni watashi no hont? no ai ni naru no desu ka ?
shikkari to watashi wo hoji jin?j?ra
anata wa watashi wo hanareru koto wa nai yo oshie te kudasai
watashi no koibito koibito…

English translation

Pale as the moon
Dark as the night
What life is this?
This eternal fight
My love so far away
Is tied to my heart
The dragon in me
Is calmed by your tranquility
You always are there
To dry my tears and help me pull through
How is it that we came to meet?
Was it love that lit the way?
How did you become my true love?
Hold me tight and never let go
Tell me that you'll never leave me
My love


The author's comments:
I was bursting at the seams with love when i wrote this, I just got really poetic.

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Yuelong GOLD said...
on Jul. 31 2011 at 11:25 pm
Yuelong GOLD, Bellevue, Washington
17 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
Win the Darwin award already!

i'm half chinese, but i take japanese

on Jul. 31 2011 at 7:49 pm
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
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Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

Oh, you're Asian?


katie-cat GOLD said...
on Jun. 7 2010 at 5:18 pm
katie-cat GOLD, McClellandtown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Look after my heart, I've left it with you."- Edward Cullen
"To love another person is to see the face of God . . ."- Les Miserables
"Don't say the old lady screamed. Bring her out and let her scream." - Mark Twain

I liked it, it was cute :)  Although, I was wondering, when I was looking through your stuff you had like chapter two and three but I couldn't find a chapter one?  Is it on here, because I'd like to read it?  :)   (Could you check out some of my stuff, too please?)  Thanks!!

Yuelong GOLD said...
on Apr. 15 2010 at 6:09 pm
Yuelong GOLD, Bellevue, Washington
17 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
Win the Darwin award already!

glad you like it. =)

on Apr. 14 2010 at 5:48 pm
MyFairyTaleEnding SILVER, Villa Ridge, Missouri
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Yes, as a matter of fact I do. I read some of the first chapter of your story. I plan to read the rest when I have more time. So far it's amazing!

Yuelong GOLD said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 3:55 pm
Yuelong GOLD, Bellevue, Washington
17 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
Win the Darwin award already!

i'm not just a poet. i'm a fiction writer too, although i hate bragging. do you like angels? my other articles are about that. i'm not spoiling the rest for you.

on Apr. 13 2010 at 9:21 pm
MyFairyTaleEnding SILVER, Villa Ridge, Missouri
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WOW!!!!!!!!! That was really really good!!! It's so beautiful and well thought! Keep it up! :)

-Diva- SILVER said...
on Mar. 6 2010 at 11:20 pm
-Diva- SILVER, Eatonville, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"I am disinclined to acquiesce to your request" -(From Pirates of the Caribbean)

Still, that is really cool you know some Japanese. I'm learning it right now.

Google is the best if you want a quick translation. Thank the internet.

Was a pretty poem. Loved it.

Yuelong GOLD said...
on Mar. 6 2010 at 6:36 pm
Yuelong GOLD, Bellevue, Washington
17 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
Win the Darwin award already!

it is japanese. they're the same poem. i know some japanese but not a lot. i went on google translate to help me out, i wrote the english version though.

-Diva- SILVER said...
on Mar. 6 2010 at 6:23 pm
-Diva- SILVER, Eatonville, Washington
6 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am disinclined to acquiesce to your request" -(From Pirates of the Caribbean)

I love it. I like how you have the first poem in Japanese I think it is. Sounds a lot like it. I love the poem all together. I love the first couple lines a lot.

Yuelong GOLD said...
on Feb. 5 2010 at 7:36 pm
Yuelong GOLD, Bellevue, Washington
17 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
Win the Darwin award already!

sorry! some of the letters got replaced with question marks!

Yuelong GOLD said...
on Feb. 5 2010 at 7:34 pm
Yuelong GOLD, Bellevue, Washington
17 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
Win the Darwin award already!

does anyone like it?


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